13:4613:46, 23 May 2024diffhist−54
Andromeda (mythology)
→In film: while I think the point here is made by the prose, it does not feel very neutral to just say "White Film Andromedas" without context there. Showing the actresses is ok. Expanding on it in the prose is even better. the title above these images without expansion on that point feels it should be better expanded upon as a sub-heading or even just as it is now as prose.Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
13:5513:55, 21 May 2024diffhist+97
Surround (video game)
re-phrasing. drawing on the screen sounds a bit like putting crayons directly to the screen. Probably should call it the VCS as that's what the system was known as at the time. some other mild re-phrasingTag: 2017 wikitext editor