04:4004:40, 21 November 2018diffhist+1,235
Evergreen State College
Added important context about Evergreen's being an experimental school that was part of a larger movement and that most of these schools have closed or changed.
19:1919:19, 17 November 2018diffhist−283
Evergreen State College
The description of the campus was streamlined and moved from lower in the entry to the start of the second paragraph. The trimming was done to eliminate repetition that occurs further down, in the section on the environmental reserve. The move to the second paragraph is based on precedent: Other Wikipedia college entries feature campus descriptions at the start when it is noteworthy.
15 November 2018
01:2301:23, 15 November 2018diffhist+1,320
Evergreen State College
This addition marks an important commencement address, recognized by the leading publication dedicated to covering higher education, at a seminal graduation ceremony, in which the graduating class exceeded 1,000 students for the first time. The paragraph adds useful historical context and responds to concerns of "recentism" in the entry.
12 November 2018
22:0022:00, 12 November 2018diffhist+39
Evergreen State College
Revised the second sentence to introduce the concept of self-directed study, which is perhaps the most distinctive difference between Evergreen and most other schools. Also, it is useful to have the term "undergraduate" in there as Evergreen's graduate programs in teaching have a more traditional approach.
03:0003:00, 12 November 2018diffhist−9
Evergreen State College
The word "abruptly" was deleted because it implies rudeness and disrespect. Its removal does not affect the factual basis of the sentence, and its use was not supported by citation.
22:1622:16, 11 November 2018diffhist+2,352
Evergreen State College
The opening paragraphs did not communicate what distinguishes Evergreen's alternative approach to higher education and how it fits into the larger alternative education scene. The introduction and the history disproportionately focus on the events of a few months in 2017. These events should be covered but they should not overshadow the larger issue of Evergreen's 50-plus-year educational endeavor. If these activities merit greater attention, they should have their own entry.Tag: references removed
21:2221:22, 20 July 2018diffhist+177
Gaming disorder
Clarified that it's a diagnosis, not a condition, as consensus hasn't been reached yet on whether it's a disorder.