8 December 2010

• 01:1501:15, 8 December 2010 diff hist +549‎ Talk:Carry On Columbus ‎ →‎Definitely could use sources: new section

7 December 2010

• 21:1021:10, 7 December 2010 diff hist −52‎ Ministry of State Security (China) ‎ Same. Too many "weasel words" stating what is not known.
• 21:0821:08, 7 December 2010 diff hist −42‎ Ministry of State Security (China) ‎ Removes short superfluous sentence.

4 December 2010

• 10:4510:45, 4 December 2010 diff hist −17‎ Gérard Depardieu ‎ removes unatested peacock phrase

2 December 2010

• 20:4720:47, 2 December 2010 diff hist +171‎ Steam locomotive ‎ Added sentences to lede. Removed tag request to expand lede.

27 November 2010

• 19:2819:28, 27 November 2010 diff hist −201‎ Pat Boone ‎ "Virtually ever" ? (sic) Meaning "virtually every"?? This is hype. If every musical performer made an appearance, that would mean millions. Words replaced with modest claim. trims overlinking

25 November 2010

• 14:4214:42, 25 November 2010 diff hist +308‎ User talk:Puffin ‎ adds cites
• 14:3514:35, 25 November 2010 diff hist +1,207‎ User talk:Puffin ‎ Incorrect revert, no reason given, incorrect statement
• 14:2414:24, 25 November 2010 diff hist −2,645‎ Matthew C. Perry ‎ Puffin, you reverted without giving an explanation in Edit Summary, then wrote to my talk page, claiming I had not given an Edit Summary (which I clearly did). I am a VERY experienced Wiki editor, btw
• 14:2114:21, 25 November 2010 diff hist +313‎ User talk:76.126.217.195 ‎ Wrong

23 November 2010

• 17:3817:38, 23 November 2010 diff hist −2,645‎ Matthew C. Perry ‎ Wikipedia is not a genealogical record, not a database, not a place to establish notability by association Tag: references removed
• 01:0801:08, 23 November 2010 diff hist −33‎ Delta IV ‎ fixes spelling typo, changes two European dates

21 November 2010

• 11:1911:19, 21 November 2010 diff hist −212‎ Jennifer Beals ‎ Removes insubstantial, unencyclopedic claim about being a "good" friend. No encyclopedic meaning, even if there was a citation, which there wasn't.

20 November 2010

• 16:2016:20, 20 November 2010 diff hist −98‎ Paul Ekman ‎ trims peacock

17 November 2010

• 23:4223:42, 17 November 2010 diff hist −140‎ Hawaii Five-O (1968 TV series) ‎ rmv ext spam links
• 23:3923:39, 17 November 2010 diff hist −774‎ Jack Lord ‎ Copy edit. Regularizes naming. WP:Linking. Removes plug for real estate developer. Removes fame-by-association off-topic actors.

8 November 2010

• 22:5722:57, 8 November 2010 diff hist −811‎ Activision ‎ One external link to an official company site. Wikipedia is WP:NOT a linkfarm, an online directory, or a free company promotional site

6 November 2010

• 03:3103:31, 6 November 2010 diff hist −31‎ Miloš Forman ‎ rmv overlinking
• 03:2803:28, 6 November 2010 diff hist −102‎ Larry Flynt ‎ The building from which he was shot has nothing to do with topic. Are there pictures of buildings from which anyone else was shot in Wiki?

5 November 2010

• 03:5303:53, 5 November 2010 diff hist +1‎ Hugh Laurie ‎ "Lead too short" is not a critical issue ... moved for the convenience of majority of Wiki readers to lower in article

4 November 2010

• 21:4721:47, 4 November 2010 diff hist +387‎ Talk:The Witcher ‎ Specificity would be helpful, even in valid criticism
• 21:3921:39, 4 November 2010 diff hist −75‎ The Witcher ‎ "widely acclaimed by fans" -- without a proper citation -- doesn't have meaning
• 11:5611:56, 4 November 2010 diff hist −2‎ Jacquard weaving ‎ Moves a definitional sentence to first para.
• 00:5800:58, 4 November 2010 diff hist +722‎ Talk:Dilbert ‎ Dilbert is a telephone technician

2 November 2010

• 07:3207:32, 2 November 2010 diff hist +10‎ Adobe Photoshop Elements ‎ Rmv TOC, per Discussion
• 07:3107:31, 2 November 2010 diff hist +441‎ Talk:Adobe Photoshop Elements ‎ Yes, TOC not needed here.

31 October 2010

• 05:2305:23, 31 October 2010 diff hist −313‎ Afghan rug ‎ Article was/is a mess of promotion, political motivated statements, and uncited personal observation. There's considerable scholarly, encyclopedic material to draw on (not blogs) Tag: references removed
• 05:0005:00, 31 October 2010 diff hist +40‎ Afghan rug ‎ Not true all rugs gain in value, only some do
• 04:5704:57, 31 October 2010 diff hist −68‎ Afghan rug ‎ Removes uncited, inspecific claim about business increasing in a certain area

30 October 2010

• 12:0112:01, 30 October 2010 diff hist −679‎ Reckitt ‎ This is company hype. Wikipedia is not a showcase for the image Benckiser wants to impose on their employees. The peacock words aren't encyclopedic here, and have questionable value, anywhere.

29 October 2010

• 20:2520:25, 29 October 2010 diff hist +3‎ Admiral Gorshkov-class frigate ‎ same
• 20:2020:20, 29 October 2010 diff hist −106‎ Admiral Gorshkov-class frigate ‎ corrects typos and English

28 October 2010

• 15:1015:10, 28 October 2010 diff hist −41‎ Sean Astin ‎ has absolutely nothing to do with article topic
• 14:5514:55, 28 October 2010 diff hist −62‎ NIST-F1 ‎ correcting the usual amateur Wiki editing

14 October 2010

• 22:2422:24, 14 October 2010 diff hist −78‎ Tropical Islands Resort ‎ Fixes English in Interesting Facts, removes pricing. Wiki is not a promotional platform

2 October 2010

• 13:0713:07, 2 October 2010 diff hist −465‎ Heidi Fleiss ‎ Removes: Multiple links to IMDB, retaining main link; broken "forbidden" link, link to amateur page w/o references
• 11:4511:45, 2 October 2010 diff hist +518‎ Talk:Gliese 581g ‎ NASA's non-role
• 07:5107:51, 2 October 2010 diff hist −335‎ Tove Jansson ‎ Removes commercial and fan links that add nothing encyclopedic that couldn't easily be added to article itself. Wikipedia is not a free advertising site. Nor is it to promote fan sites.

30 September 2010

• 10:1710:17, 30 September 2010 diff hist +436‎ Talk:The Beatles ‎ Let's move on. The Beatles knew how.
• 10:0510:05, 30 September 2010 diff hist +560‎ Talk:The Beatles ‎ Really: enough PR and politically correct. fools and friends of fools

29 September 2010

• 08:4108:41, 29 September 2010 diff hist +629‎ Talk:Clay Blair ‎ Opinions which are backed up according to Wiki policy

27 September 2010

• 12:1612:16, 27 September 2010 diff hist −2,363‎ Talk:Dungeons & Dragons Online ‎ The problem with DDO Wiki described has now been resolved, so comment is unnecessary.

25 September 2010

• 12:4412:44, 25 September 2010 diff hist −89‎ Tim Lincecum ‎ Overlinking WP:LINKING. Other minor copy edit.
• 12:0912:09, 25 September 2010 diff hist +416‎ Wikipedia:Reference desk/Archives/Miscellaneous/2010 September 20 ‎ Wiki babble goes on forever
• 12:0012:00, 25 September 2010 diff hist −756‎ Kaffir lime ‎ Removes material and reference which is not to the reliable reference stated, but instead to a blog. Removes peculiar, uncited suggestion that the leaves look like some insect. (What insect is that?) Tag: references removed

23 September 2010

• 18:5318:53, 23 September 2010 diff hist −7‎ Potlatch ‎ removes peacock word "vital" which is not supported by citation

19 September 2010

• 08:2408:24, 19 September 2010 diff hist −122‎ Catherine McGoohan ‎ Removes pointless comparison to her father's career
• 07:3607:36, 19 September 2010 diff hist −247‎ Barbara Stanwyck ‎ Removes uncited, not-necessarily-factual editorial commentary. Removes Wiki-disallowed blog ref. Tag: references removed
• 07:0807:08, 19 September 2010 diff hist −232‎ Richard Dean Anderson ‎ WP:LINKING

3 June 2009

• 08:4808:48, 3 June 2009 diff hist +43‎ Dunn (surname) ‎ →‎J