14:2314:23, 21 January 2013diffhist+555 N
User talk:117.200.243.51
What was your reasoning behind undoing the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Buzz_Aldrin&action=historysubmit&diff=534162187&oldid=534150638|meticulous editing work I did] ?
11:5511:55, 21 January 2013diffhist−1,292
Buzz Aldrin
Revised several sections, minimizing links. Still overlinking situation in latter part of article. Added 'To the Moon'. Made more readable, more concise. Photos were in way of text. Needs more work.
09:5509:55, 31 August 2012diffhist−1,072
Project V
Started clean up. Colloquialized much of the language and grammar. Recategorized and added categories to the topics. Sources and references still need adding.
11:1811:18, 30 August 2012diffhist+15
Buzz Aldrin
Set "overlinked" tag - too many links & lots of general, out of context links. Due to be cleaned up hopefully.
08:5608:56, 28 August 2012diffhist−31
Dan Peek
→America: Unsourced and ambiguous quotation, "you name it" is a colloquialism that lends little to informing and confuses the issue. Reworded for clarity, and now is more concise.
22:1822:18, 6 August 2012diffhist+15
Freemartin
→Fictional use: Minor change, "female character" to "woman," in fact there are several female characters in the novel that are not women, but female extraterrestrials. Thus the more stringent designation of "women" is needed here.