23:0023:00, 16 September 2018diffhist−3,634
Talk:Richard Kollmar
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15 September 2018
17:4017:40, 15 September 2018diffhist+3,130
Richard Kollmar
Restore segment about the pioneering Broadway musical Early to Bed for which producer Richard Kollmar hired Fats Waller. It made Waller the first black songwriter to compose songs specifically for a largely white Broadway audience. Reword subsequent paragraph so Early to Bed fits in.
21:1221:12, 29 July 2018diffhist−147
Anthony Perkins
→Death: Description of bench at his former home seems like a good ending for the article. 9/11 terrorist attack belongs in other section of article.
20:5820:58, 29 July 2018diffhist−57
Gavin Gordon (actor)
rem a claim that depends totally on a fringe source, See Talk page for Edward Everett Horton where discussion of the alleged Horton-Gordon relationship goes back to 2008.
01:0701:07, 1 May 2018diffhist+1,643
Janis Joplin
→Monterey and breakthrough: add new text that is supported by legitimate sources; Readers of this article find out the date of Joplin's first nationwide TV appearance and a web site that can lead them to purchasing the surviving audio from it.
18:2518:25, 29 March 2018diffhist+109
Johnnie Ray
→Early career and success: To remind readers of the correct time frame, I rephrased the first sentence of the paragraph that follows the paragraph that jumps ahead to the 1972 network television broadcast of Rogue's Gallery. Songs such as "Please Mr. Sun" date from the 1950s.
02:1902:19, 28 March 2018diffhist+1,152
Anne Fogarty
new text with a new source that is legitimate for Wikipedia -- You can click on the URL and read the details it provides about Fogarty's life, death and burial.
00:1700:17, 18 March 2018diffhist+43
Janis Joplin
→Pearl: Move comma so it is inside the parenthesis. Correct mention of the time frame and place where Joplin was voted "ugliest man on campus." She was a student at the University of Texas for less than a year. Saying "the year" she was there is pushing it.
00:0600:06, 18 March 2018diffhist−21
Janis Joplin
→Early recordings and personal life: 1962–1965: I checked our source "Scars of Sweet Paradise." It says people in other offices of Giarritano's building could hear Janis sing occasionally, but it doesn't say they clapped. It was a building for psychological counseling in multiple office units. Such a building requires privacy and confidentiality. How would you know if someone in another office claps?
22:0422:04, 11 February 2018diffhist+456
List of unsolved deaths
rv good faith edit by Edward 321 -- Case is not "still solved." In Sept. 2017, district attorney's office confirmed original status, which was "circumstances undetermined" -- See Talk page.
01:0401:04, 28 January 2018diffhist+1,076
Johnnie Ray
OK, I removed the part about "unknown to basic cable television viewers." I removed the assertion that Ray appeared in more than one high school gym. He did perform at a high school gym in Alexandria, LA in 1987. Source backs that up. Text is legible.
27 January 2018
23:1823:18, 27 January 2018diffhist+1,215
Johnnie Ray
restore previous edit, this time with a legitimate source -- This source is a column in the newspaper called The Town Talk in Alexandria, Louisiana dated February 18, 1987 -- It says Ray and other singers performed on Feb. 16 in a local high school gym.
19:4219:42, 27 January 2018diffhist+740
Johnnie Ray
→Later career: Add a reminder that despite Ray playing large venues in Las Vegas and Atlantic City, venues he played far away from those cities (in the USA) did not enhance his career. Add a second reference about Billie Holiday receiving star.
19:1719:17, 27 January 2018diffhist+63
Dorothy Kilgallen
→Early life and career: Because the sentences about Kilgallen's stint writing her column in California was removed, then we must also remove the words "Back in New York in 1938." Add detail about her name in opening credits of a 1937 Hollywood film.
00:3300:33, 22 January 2018diffhist+1,126
Janis (film)
add details that tell you that rockumentary viewers had to wait several months after a rockumentary was completed before they could see it -- no MTV then.