20:1320:13, 13 October 2015diffhist+91
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→Media roles: Noting how impossible it is to view this opening, absent sources, because of broad nature of claims, and apparent incongruities. The may have teased out the nuances here; we have not.
19:5819:58, 13 October 2015diffhist+138
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Editing to move toward encyclopedic. Conservative edit, keeping all factual content. **Again, primary source for event is insufficient as sole source if interpreting. Noted opening sentences nearing puffery/weasel, and without sources. Le Prof
19:3119:31, 13 October 2015diffhist+60
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Noting that Joel Best U of C book needs page numbers. Note, earlier Kawash tag indicated page number rage (27-72) is either in error, or too broad.
19:2319:23, 13 October 2015diffhist−239
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Combined redundant Kawash refs, per WP policy, using rp markup; feel free to migrate to other style/format, like bibliography and short reference, but this was the one I know, and fast.
19:1419:14, 13 October 2015diffhist+313
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Distinction made between citing events, versus interpreting those events. LATTER STATEMENTS NEEDS SOURCES. Separated hist'ical/factual fr myth citns. Noted interpretations of myth citns done by editor, need 2ndary sources.
18:3618:36, 13 October 2015diffhist+699
R&D intensity
Began improving the lead (moving the key cited definition sentence up into it). Created Definition and aim section. Moved citations into main body, repeating text as necessary. Corrected and completed opening 1990 article presentation in the textbook.