13:1513:15, 26 April 2024diffhist+19 m
National Hockey League
→Teams: the sentence about the Coyotes suffered from singular/plural disagreement by using plural at the beginning and singular at the end. I tweaked the wording slightly to fix that and made one other minor wording change.
17:3217:32, 23 April 2024diffhist+4 m
National Hockey League
Corrected punctuation errors (missing apostrophe in a possessive; violation of MOS:DATECOMMA when someone failed to include the comma after the year); fixed singular/plural disagreement ("Arizona Coyotes" is plural, so "its" is incorrect).
14:2614:26, 23 April 2024diffhist+3
National Hockey League
→Teams: previous edit contained two typos. I am not sure the previous editor's characterization of the Coyotes/Utah situation is entirely accurate from a legal standpoint, although from a practical layman's standpoint it surely is. I'll let someone else decide on that—I'm just cleaning up typos. (I'm not sure beginning a sentence with the word "This" is really a good idea, but every time I try to rephrase it I wind up with more of a mess, so I gave up.)
19:1519:15, 22 April 2024diffhist−3,592
Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour
→Set list: two paragraphs deleted because they had turned into a long list of songs performed that was both unsourced and arguably unencylopedic. The two paragraphs seemed to violate WP:STICKTOTHESOURCE, WP:NOTCATALOG, WP:NOTNEWS (insofar as they represented a running list of songs performed on the tour), and WP:NOTDATABASE. In short, this material seems more suited for a fan site like Greasy Lake, or the late lamented Backstreets.com, that revels in minutia.
12:2312:23, 22 April 2024diffhist−14
National Hockey League
→Teams: the sentence I reverted in my last edit was still somewhat ungrammatical, so I've taken a stab at rewriting it. Also deleted the word "current" in regard to the Coyotes franchise because it's superfluous—there is no "past" or "future" such franchise.
19:0419:04, 20 April 2024diffhist−9 m
Utah NHL team
No need to link the Jazz in consecutive paragraphs. I debated removing redundant links in the "establishment" section but decided not to do so for the moment.
18:2518:25, 19 April 2024diffhist0
1987 Washington Redskins season
→Personnel: moved Anthony Allen from the regular roster to the scab roster. As the text further down (and in his article) explains, he started on the scab roster and then was signed to the regular roster after the strike ended. I seem to recall he wore #89 as a scab, but I don't have a source to cite for that.current
13:1713:17, 19 April 2024diffhist−4 m
Utah NHL team
Changed plural to singular in the final sentence of the first paragraph to agree with the usage in the first two sentences, both of which use singular. Obviously this will likely change in the future once there is a real name.
13:1513:15, 19 April 2024diffhist−12 m
Utah NHL team
Removed two parenthetical "defined terms" (MLS and NFL) because neither one appears in the article a second time. There's not much point in "defining" an acronym that is not used a second time. (The "MLS" reference was also awkward in terms of positioning a possessive form.)
12:3012:30, 19 April 2024diffhist−33
National Hockey League
→List of teams: revised the footnote for the same reasons why, two edits back, I removed the asterisk from the table as to Utah. The Coyotes are not "now Utah NHL team" according to the league and the franchise(s).
12:2612:26, 19 April 2024diffhist−1
National Hockey League
→List of teams: removed the asterisk from the Utah team. While, as a practical matter, obviously it is a franchise relocation, the NHL and the team have chosen to treat it as an expansion for legal reasons. Using the asterisk here is thus potentially misleading and is also inconsistent with the Utah team's article, which (correctly) calls it an expansion team.
21:0221:02, 18 April 2024diffhist−2
Arizona Coyotes
"Has" and "their" don't agree with each other. There's no ideal solution to this, but the subject/antecedent for both words is "franchise" (or, before my prior edit, "team"), which is a singular word. I therefore think the singular is grammatically correct here.
21:0121:01, 18 April 2024diffhist+5
Arizona Coyotes
Changed "team" to "franchise" in the first sentence. Perhaps pedantic, but with no coach, players, etc., it's not much of a "team."
20:1920:19, 18 April 2024diffhist−86
Arizona Coyotes
Removed Utah from the infobox. As the article explains, the NHL is treating this like a Cleveland Browns/Baltimore Ravens situation.
19:0319:03, 18 April 2024diffhist−501
Subway Series
→World Series matchups: The 2000 World Series does not belong in a table showing early and mid-1900s World Series when the Mets didn't even exist. The 2000 World Series is discussed further down the article.Tag: Reverted