• "Since its debut, the series has earned widespread critical acclaim, nominated..." the widespread critical acclaim but will need citing and going straight into nominated doesn't read correctly, add "and has bee" before nominated
  • Cited and fixed. -- Wikipedical (talk) 22:52, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Try and vary the start to some of these paras, but bland reading In 2006 over and over
  • Changed Emmy paragraphs to match other awards. -- Wikipedical (talk) 23:11, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Tables do not currently meet MOS:DTT, col and rowscopes need to be added
  • Fixed. -- Wikipedical (talk) 22:38, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• "Since 1995, he..." typo and perhaps say "Awarded since 1995..."
  • Fixed. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:51, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• No need to SHOUT in ref titles, just write them out normally
  • Fixed. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:51, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• ref 7 and 8 need en dashes in the title instead of hyphens
  • Fixed. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:51, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Images could do with alt text NapHit (talk) 20:08, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:57, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Is that picture really needed for an awards page? Perhaps replace it with a key person, etc., like the main actor, again, etc.
  • It's broadline fine. I guess. TBrandley 01:57, 20 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Awards & Nominations → Awards and nominations. Per MOS:CAPS, etc.
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Unlink television per WP:OVERLINK
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Fox → the Fox network
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• As of August 2012 → To date
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Remove those table headers in the lists of awards/nom.
  • Can you please clarify what you mean here? Don't quite understand. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • I fixed that concern. TBrandley 01:57, 20 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• Many linking problems in references. Please see WP:REPEATLINK, which states that you should repeat link in references. So, New York Times should be linked there, etc.
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• I have made some changes for the external links. So, that's fine.
• Categories should be listed in alphabetical order please.
  • Done. -- Wikipedical (talk) 21:11, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

TBrandley 02:39, 19 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Sortable tables should link all linkable items every time.
• When sorting people's names, it's common to do it by surname using the ((sortname)) template.
• Would prefer to see col widths the same from section to section.
• "Television Series - Musical or Comedy." in the caption, should be an en-dash.
• Don't mix date formats for retrieval dates etc.

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:41, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• • All done. Removed sortable tables to match other TV awards featured lists. Aside from tables with corresponding images, all col widths are now consistent, again, like the other TV awards FLs. -- Wikipedical (talk) 19:01, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Cool, but col widths aren't working as being consistent for me. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:07, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
      • How about now? -- Wikipedical (talk) 20:54, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]