""once again under written, and brown is not allowed the opportunity to explore and reveal his character traits,[33] with the character being "too nice"." - is the sentence from once to traits a quote?
""Christ, I miss the Cold War")." - why a bracket?
Where the films are listed there is a bit white space. I would put Bernard Lee's and Judi Dench's films/games into 2 columns to remove some of this white space.