01:5701:57, 10 December 2012diffhist−2,893
JONAH
Lamm article didn't say anything about JONAH, so I deleted the sentence citing it as a source for JONAH's beliefs. Deleted a generally uncited paragraph written like an ad and a partisan cite. Otherwise, general NPOV cleanup.
14:4414:44, 20 December 2009diffhist+648
Leib Tropper
"In 1981...environment" and "In 1995...lifestyle" don't read NPOV at all, but rather like an Aish-type ad. I'm done editing this article, but I thought it important to establish some precedents.