06:5606:56, 1 August 2018diffhist−31 m
De'Mond Parker
~~~~ Eliminated the subjective phrase "one of their alltime greats" . No titles, no Heisman, no records does NOT equal "all time great". ~~~~
23:0523:05, 26 May 2018diffhist−251
Cossack raid on Istanbul (1620)
~~~~Poorly translated from Ukrainian. It had many baffling phrases in it (such as: "The fear of the Cossacks was so great, that the commanders hades Turkish sailors, by beat to make the galleries go out against the Ukrainian seagulls." I simplified the article, removing unnecessary phrasing and correcting grammar. I left the general "tone" of the article intact, I think.