02:2002:20, 8 July 2017diffhist−21
Ken Read
Camp Green was not "the first glacier training venue in North America": Red Lodge (Beartooth Pass, WY/MT) and Timberline (Palmer Glacier, Mt. Hood, OR) predate it by decades.
16:1016:10, 5 September 2016diffhist0
Boeing 787 Dreamliner
According to the reference, the 787's 9-abreast seats really are the narrowest in the business. Not narrower than "other airliners", narrower than all other jet airliners in current service (possibly ever). Change wording back to reflect this.
05:0705:07, 8 March 2016diffhist+138
SuperH
It's not correct that "no" non-simulated SH-5 hardware was ever released. The "Cayman" development board, with real SH-5 CPU, was used to port NetBSD to SH-5 in 2002.
07:4507:45, 8 April 2013diffhist+11
Bromium
Advert tag -- this article even includes cut-and-pasted marketing text referring to the article author (obviously someone at Bromium) as "us" ("allows us to..." etc.).
03:3703:37, 14 August 2012diffhist−641
Travis (chimpanzee)
Remove ungrammatical, unsourced pop-culture references. If you're going to put them back, please at least make sure they parse English sentences.
29 October 2011
05:4405:44, 29 October 2011diffhist+390
Aluminum building wiring
Fix weird claim that Ideal #65 nuts, though expressly disclaimed by Ideal as a permanent retrofit solution, can be used to retrofit aluminum wiring.
05:3005:30, 29 October 2011diffhist−188
Dicloxacillin
Remove nonsensical "if three are taken..." claim of side effects absent any discussion of three units of *what dose*.
11 September 2011
04:5104:51, 11 September 2011diffhist+7
Peter Eisenman
Switch tag to Advert|section -- it is the introductory text which is problematic in this way, the rest of the article is fairly balanced.
04:4604:46, 11 September 2011diffhist+11
Peter Eisenman
Mark with advert -- this reads like a puff piece by a PR firm. It might as well say the guy walks on water and distributes loaves and fishes.
31 May 2011
18:0618:06, 31 May 2011diffhist−29
Union Carbide
Bizarrely, this article has failed to note for approximately 10 years that Union Carbide is a subsidiary of Dow. Also adjust headcount to match current Union Carbide website claim.
17 May 2011
14:4814:48, 17 May 2011diffhist+406
Aluminum building wiring
Revise to reflect April 2011 CPSC decision to add AlumiConn connector to list of recommended methods for upgrading aluminum wired homes.
16 May 2011
16:3816:38, 16 May 2011diffhist+218
Atrioventricular septal defect
Fix up discussion of surgical treatment slightly with reference to Nadas. These defects are not (or if at all, extremely rarely) repaired by catheter procedures; remove claim that said otherwise.
06:0806:08, 12 March 2011diffhist+36
Coeliac disease
Mark weaselly language about gluten-free diets "Sometimes" curing conditions such as autism in which "sometimes" giladin antibodies are detected with weasel-inline.
4 March 2011
01:0001:00, 4 March 2011diffhist+550
Aluminum building wiring
Reorganize some strangely worded text that was at the front of the article. Mark missing citations, add details about the AlumiConn connector and link to CPSC meeting minutes in which Ideal states that the "Twister" nut is not for retrofits.
20:2820:28, 30 August 2010diffhist+151
Coyote Point Systems
Remove some marketing type language. Still *must* find a reference for the relative dates of introduction of the F5 Big-IP and Coyote Point Equalizer. Google doesn't cover well so far back.