23:0823:08, 12 May 2011diffhist−7,006
V. S. Ramachandran
The edited version reads far better than the original, which offers speculation rather than fact. The "undo" was unwarranted. // Undid revision 428835039 by Edhubbard (talk)
17 March 2011
22:0722:07, 17 March 2011diffhist+470
J. B. Jackson
The early life paragraphs of this entry were not satisfactorily written; this corrects some banal phrasing and makes the entry more active.
23:1423:14, 16 January 2011diffhist+208
Black toad
Added reference from NPR source on Death Valley toad and conservation efforts; fixed several misplaced commas.