18:3318:33, 30 March 2024diffhist+268
Boris Johnson
Undid revision 1216364869 by DeFacto (talk) The reason for his resignation from Parliament is worthy of note, and unprecedented for a former PM. It is crucial that the lead makes clear he resigned in disgrace - it is one of the defining facts in his career. That fact should not be hidden in the article body.Tags: UndoReverted
12:1012:10, 30 March 2024diffhist−52
Boris Johnson
His resignation from Parliament, and its background, are a matter of historical fact - it should be mentioned here. The extent of his subsequent involvement in politics is open to discussion, however; it would be better discussed in the main body of the article.
12:0312:03, 30 March 2024diffhist+320
Boris Johnson
Undid revision 1216184927 by Czello (talk) His resignation from Parliament, subsequent to the findings of the Privileges Committee, is one of the defining points in his political career. It belongs in this introduction.Tag: Undo
11:5411:54, 10 March 2024diffhist+87
Boris Johnson
I think this sentence, with the addition of 'relatively', is sound. His trip to Venezuela was 'with the knowledge of the FCO' in the weak sense that he informed the FCO while he was on the way there.
11:0011:00, 10 March 2024diffhist+111
Boris Johnson
BJ has little involvement in politics now. I think we'd need evidence of political activity since his resignation as an MP, before calling him a 'politician'. Many other non-politicians and ex-politicians write political journalism.Tag: Reverted
20:3720:37, 29 January 2023diffhist+88
Nadhim Zahawi
The tax avoidance wasn't just alleged - he accepted the truth of it when he paid the penalty. He was sacked for not declaring this, not for the tax avoidance itself.
21:4221:42, 15 January 2023diffhist+14
Mathematics
A second attempt at embedding the subject, 'Mathematics', within a more general discipline, in the 1st sentence of the text. This is the usual practice in Wikipedia. I wonder if linking to articles like numbers is really a problem - readers would only click these links if they wanted to follow them up.
11:5211:52, 1 January 2023diffhist+45
Mathematical model
'abstract' and 'concrete' - the aim of a mathematical model is to provide a formal description independent of the concrete application.
11:3311:33, 1 January 2023diffhist+4
Mathematics
'Knowledge' should be linked to the page for that word, embedding the topic 'mathematics' in a broader one.Tag: Reverted