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Indigenous people of the Everglades region

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London

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Unconventional warfare (United States Department of Defense doctrine)

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Facebook

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Thoroughbred

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Homicidal ideation

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Jeffrey Steele

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Ubuntu (operating system)

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I'm striking things out as I fix them. ffm 15:16, 8 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

HMS Cardiff (D108)

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Carlito's Way

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Treaty of Axim (1642)

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Thomas Cranmer

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The End (Red Dwarf episode)

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List of Red Dwarf episodes

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Mario Kart Wii

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Treaty of Butre (1656)

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Touch Me I'm Sick

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History of Blackpool F.C. (1887–1962)

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Survivor Series (2004)

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Year Zero (album)

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The Simpsons (season 3)

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Dr. Dre

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Rachel Corrie

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Himura Kenshin

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2008-09 Duke Blue Devils men's basketball team

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Gardens of Versailles

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Treehouse of Horror VI

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Formation and evolution of the Solar System

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Bert Trautmann

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Pat the Bunny

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Effects of Hurricane Dennis in Florida

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Ross Kemp in Afghanistan

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List of Lizzie McGuire episodes

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British Rail Class 47

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List of U.S. Open (golf) champions

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London Underground

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Kosovo

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System 6

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Stigand

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Lawrence Taylor

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List of political parties in Italy

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Black Sabbath

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Religious nationalism

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Chrono (series)

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Abbey Mills Mosque

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Sermons of Dean Swift

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Halo (series)

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List of missing ships

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Robert of Jumièges

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Dredg

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Legacy of Kain: Soul Reaver

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King Arthur

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List of baryons

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Halle Berry

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Marvel Cave

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List of St. Louis Rams first-round draft picks

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J.R. Chandler and Babe Carey

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SummerSlam (1988)

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Aldred

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Supercouple

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The Beatles

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Georgi Kinkladze

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Rudolf Wanderone Jr.

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The Beatles (album)

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2008 attacks on North Indians in Maharashtra

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Call of Duty 4: Modern Warfare

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Crush 40

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George Liquor

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New York State Route 28

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Apollo 9

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Evolution (Dove)

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Super Bowl XXXVIII halftime show controversy

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Pokémate

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National Museum of Beirut

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1995 Japanese Grand Prix

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Ireland national football team (1882-1950)

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Eastbourne

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Avatar: The Last Airbender (Season 1)

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Ghosts I–IV

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Talyllyn Railway

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Eva Green

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GoldenEye

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Paul Rand

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Voice type

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Matthew Shepard

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Sumatra (chicken)

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Thriller (album)

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Ty Cobb

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Crabble Stadium

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List of Tour de France winners

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Self-aligned gate

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List of Oakland Raiders head coaches

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List of Tampa Bay Buccaneers head coaches

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Vocal registration

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Deva Victrix

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Fovea

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Hours of service

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Gyromitra esculenta

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Tuatara

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M-28 (Michigan highway)

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Oxford

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Edwin Astley

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2006 Atlantic hurricane season

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Philip K. Dick

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Chickasaw Turnpike

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List of SpongeBob SquarePants episodes

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Dragon Ball (manga)

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Elaine Paige

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Christmas tree cultivation

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Adelaide Rams

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David Owen Dodd

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Aspirin

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Ozzie Smith

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Passive dynamics

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2006 FIFA World Cup

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Johnson Creek (Willamette River)

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Beyoncé Knowles

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Samsara (Jainism)

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Moksa (Jainism)

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Kevala Jñāna

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Purvas

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Jain philosophy

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Anekantavada

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LNER Class A1/A3

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Aeneas Mackintosh

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ITC Entertainment

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Sega Mega Drive

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Ralph d'Escures

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A Day in the Life

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Hip hop culture

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Hip hop

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MythBusters

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Philadelphia Phillies seasons

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Hatamoto

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London Underground

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Liam Miller

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Old Town of Berne

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