List of municipalities in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page. No further edits should be made to this page. The closing editor's comments were: 18 days, 4 support, 0 oppose. 1 Neutral. Promote. Scorpion0422 20:13, 14 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

List of municipalities in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania is a complete list of all current 52 municipalities in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania, and has two shorter lists of all known former townships, and of all other counties formed from or containing susbtantial territory from the county. It has had a peer review, which is here, that found no major problems. The suggestions for improvement have all been addressed and we believe the list meets the requirements for featured list candidates. This article, including the large clickable map, follows the model of List of Kentucky counties, which is a featured list. The picture galleries follow the model of List of Pennsylvania state parks, which is also a Featured list. This is a self-nomination in that we are the editors who have worked the most on this list and the municipality articles themselves. Thanks in advance for all input, Dincher and Ruhrfisch 05:55, 26 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Those are just suggestions, though - I support the list as is :) -- SatyrTN (talk | contribs) 16:12, 29 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Original oppose comments by Circeus


  • Oppose
    • I'm not a fan of the galleries, but then maybe that's just me.
    • It seems unnecessary to link "City" and "borough" in the table, when they should have been linked in the table.
    • "All territory in Pennsylvania is incorporated: there are no unincorporated areas in the county or state."
      • This feels redundant and poorly written
    • On one hand, you say "there are no unincorporated areas in the county or state," and right after "Unincorporated areas within Lycoming County townships include [...]".
    • Consider renaming "remarks" to "etymology" and drops the "include" parts. (or just actually list these villages separately,especially if the "counties split from Lycoming" section goes).
    • I'm really not sure that "Pennsylvania counties formed from Lycoming" is a relevant section. This is really a big chunk of an obvious Territorial evolution of Pennsylvania article (cf. Territorial evolution of Mexico, Canada, the United States, Australia...). Without a map showing the original extant of Lycoming county, it's just very confusing too.
      • At the very least this section (and the "Former townships" one are probably overdetailed: since they are not parts of Lycoming per se, they don't need to give as much details as the primary list. (this added as I realized it in the subpage discussion)
    • Far too many spurious wikilinks in the references. The only one (besides dates) I can see useful is the first instance of Pennsylvania Historical and Museum Commission. And the "no ISBN" notes are silly.
  • Circeus 04:10, 5 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Answers and further discussion moved on subpage Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates/List of municipalities in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania, because of massive size. I did this because it would allow the discussion, which is quite overwhelming to be split and refactored (sections) for useability. Circeus 19:59, 5 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • I was bold and moved it from the subpage to the Talk page, as that seemed a more standard place for such a discussion. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 17:04, 7 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
      • Really, really sorry I didn't get around to it before. Loking at the discussion right now.Circeus 01:13, 8 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Neutral I give up. Clearly I am absolutely incapable of voicing my argument with anything even remotely close to coherence. See the overlylong and apparently quite pointless discussion for all the grim and grit. The CliffsNotes version (WTF, the second level listing won't work!?):
    • Pointless data bloating the "former townships" and "counties formed from Lycoming" to the point of ridiculousness
    • Listing the villages within the table is pointless as it makes it practically impossible to even know they are actually listed.
  • Circeus 17:35, 8 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Reply I have wrestled with what, if anything, to reply here. First, I want to thank Circeus for his helpful comments. Second, we believe that it is useful to have the same basic information for all the counties and townships in the article, including their current area and population. Originally the columns (info) were identical for both the current and former townships lists, but we removed "formed from" from former townships at the suggestion of a reviewer here (see above). We feel that area and population are useful for comparisons, and give an idea of what the past (former territory) has become. While Circeus believes this is "pointless data", we feel it is better to include it and let readers choose to ignore it, than not include it and wish we had. Third, there is now a List of villages in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania article, which might remove one of Circeus' objections. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:47, 12 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]