Football (soccer)

This article is well-written, comprehensive, and detailed. I think that this would make a fine FA. Raichu 22:15, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've got rid of the sub sub levels and moved the history from within Laws of the Game to its own section above. I've added something about pre-19th Century games but still need to tidy the section and copyedit it thoroughly. Oldelpaso 20:58, 5 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I've converted two of the lists to prose, and I'm working on adding more references. Oldelpaso 18:50, 5 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The other lists still need converting to prose, the article fails FA criteria 2a. — Wackymacs 10:24, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Criteria 2a does not state that an article must contain no lists whatsoever! Sometimes lists are the best way of presenting information. The article only uses a few short lists, so I don't see what the problem is. — Dan1980 11:46, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • You are correct, it does not say that. But it does say the prose must be "... compelling, even brilliant" - this isn't what I call compelling or brilliant, sorry. The lists are not the only problem, the overall context needs copy-editing. — Wackymacs 12:22, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]