The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted 02:59, 11 September 2007.


Exosome complex[edit]

This article was written recently with the intention of going to FAC. It has had (limited) peer review at Wikipedia:Peer review/Exosome (RNA degradation machinery)/archive1 and meets (in my opinion) the FAC criteria. It is a self nomination, but the article has been edited also by others during the last days, mainly fixing the last remaining spelling and stylistic errors.

Some remarks:

Comments are welcome and will be addressed. --Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 21:43, 18 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah I agree with you on that one, the current title (Exosome (RNA degradation machinery)) is too long. If no one objects, I'll move it to Exosome complex later. --08:32, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
Done --Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 13:53, 19 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  1. "That allowed the identification of more human exosome proteins and eventually the characterization of all components in the complex." - not clear what "that" is.
  2. "archaebacteria" and "archaeabacteria"- the correct term is archaea. Similarly "eubacteria" is wrong, now just called "bacteria". See link.
  3. "it is assumed these complexes are evolutionary related and have a common ancestor." - assumptions aren't evidence-based, "thought" might be a better word.
  4. "As the autobodies are mainly found in patients" - typo? autoantibodies?
Thank for your suggestions, they have been addressed [1] as follows:
  1. Reworded to: "Purfication of this "PM/Scl complex" allowed the identification of more human exosome proteins ..."
  2. All instances replaced with "archaea" and "bacteria", respectively
  3. Reworded to: "these complexes are thought to be evolutionary related"
  4. Technically nothing is wrong here, as autoantibodies are also antibodies, but I changed it to: "These autoantibodies are mainly found.." anyway for clarity
--Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 06:33, 20 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your reply. I agree with you on proteins and genes, but unfortunately Wikipedia only contains articles about a minorty of all proteins. Links to external databases are one of the few ways to deal with it. I have just also added links to the yeast genome database, but if you have any other suggestion, let me know. --Cpt. Morgan (Reinoutr) 08:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.