- Mitanshu Kawlekar (talk|edit|history|logs|links|watch) (restore)
I believe this article should be restored, since I find the action taken by the nominator and closing admin as "hasty". I completely disagree that the article is promotional or if had any WP:Peacock text, it could be trimmed and not speedily deleted. Initially when I questioned the closing admin, I did not get a sufficient answer but an alternative method to push it to draft space. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rejoy2003 (talk • contribs) 19:54, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Allow Recreation as Draft - On the one hand, the article probably was spam. On the other hand, the author should have a copy on their computer, and should be allowed to restore it to Draft for review. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:47, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your response, Robert. I still do not believe the article was spam and hoping it is restored completely into article space, maybe you could had gotten a better detailed insight if it was {TempUndeleted}, hence I ask the admins for the same so that the editors can have a better insight towards the speedy deletion. Rejoy2003(talk) 21:11, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- This is the second speedy deletion of an article about Kawlekar. @Bbb23 offered restoration as a draft which is probably the best outcome here. Text such as This initiative aimed to redefine the way people experienced live events by bringing them directly into their homes. is promotional and if this were at AfD, I would not hesitate to !vote delete. Star Mississippi 21:19, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- You've picked one sentence from the article. I do not disagree with you, it might sound promotional. But don't you think a WP:NPOV tag would had been more sufficient? It's not like whole article is promotional. It seems like a case of deletionists involved in this matter. Rejoy2003(talk) 21:39, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- That sentence is 100% promotional content. If a sentence in an article is 100% promotional, the other sentences usually range between 0% and 100%. No, a tag is not sufficient. Wikipedia is not for promotion. If the article is restored, it should only be restored to draft space. We should all be deletionists when it comes to advertising. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:57, 14 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- How many sentences would you like? I count exactly two, out of the fifty in the final revision, that might survive unchanged in a neutrally-written article, and cutting it down to those two ("Mitanshu Kawlekar was born on 3 March 1999. As of 2022, he is a final year Electronics and Telecommunications Engineering student at Goa Engineering College.") would leave it an A7. 96% of an article being in need of revision does not call for an NPOV tag. —Cryptic 00:41, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- To be honest, I'm stil finding it hard to believe. I might have been too lenient to check over the article's neutrality or the sources I used had a lot of peacock statements which maybe I failed to trim down. Do you also think the "Personal views" section too was promotional? 96% seems pretty bad. Rejoy2003(talk) 05:27, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- The entire section is undue weight, though not in the sense that's usually meant by that term on Wikipedia. By including it, especially at the length you did, you're saying that this person's (laudable) opposition to ragging is a much larger part of his life than it is. The same is true, for example, for the paragraph about the beach cleanup in the Career section - a two hour beach cleanup is not an appreciable part of anybody's career; that you were able to find an ostensibly-third-party puffpiece about it doesn't mean it belongs in a neutral biography.I do want to make the point that, though the promotionalism was pervasive, it was mostly on the mild end of what's speedy-deletable. Bbb23's offer to restore to draftspace was exactly the right call to make; this article is salvageable, even if it's not at the point where just tagging and leaving it in mainspace as-is would be tolerable. —Cryptic 01:39, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Where was this discussed with the deleting admin? SmokeyJoe (talk) 01:10, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- User_talk:Bbb23#Mitanshu_Kawlekar seems to be the totality of it, @SmokeyJoe Star Mississippi 01:22, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- There was also this. —Cryptic 01:44, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks. Refer User:Rejoy2003 back to that. Support Bbb23’s offer:
I am willing to restore the article to draft space so you can work on it, but only if you promise to use WP:AFC, meaning you will not move it to article space on your own but instead allow experienced reviewers to evaluate it.--Bbb23 (talk) 17:56, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
- Endorse the G11 speedy deletion. Rejoy’s follow up points appear to be timewasting. Either accept Bbb23’s offer, or give it up. SmokeyJoe (talk) 03:14, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Smokey, the deleting admin's offer is good. Seems like this article will mostly be moving there. But the "AFC" part was something unexpected. I don't want my article to stall over there for months, I've had similar experiences in the AFC in the past. Can't I just take it to draft space and work on it and then move back to article space? Rejoy2003(talk) 05:08, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- The offer is that you don’t move it yourself. You can ask for a variety of things, but I strongly recommend that you take the obvious advice to have it draftified and then fix it in draftspace, before asking anything more. Otherwise, you’re asking on the hypothetical that you’ve done a good job fixing an unacceptable page. SmokeyJoe (talk) 06:27, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- I mean technically you can as the title hasn't been salted, but you shouldn't. You don't understand the problems with the article, and restoring it without addressing those would lead to yet another deletion. That turns into tendentious editing and you risk being blocked. AfC is the better choice. If you accept that, one of us will probably restore the draft in fewer than the seven days here. Star Mississippi 12:43, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Endorse. based on what I can learn about the deleted content from those who can see it. G11 works the same in both namespaces so, if restored, the page would just be G11-eligible in draftspace. Upon restoration, the draft could be tagged by anyone, and an administrator should delete it, and we should want that to happen. It is a good thing when pages eligible for speedy deletion are identified and deleted. So if this DRV leads to restoration, it will only have led to an outcome that begs for that good thing to happen. The same good thing that we're already enjoying by the page being deleted. About AfC specifically: I don't think that DRV can impose AfC, as it isn't practicable to make this optional process function like that on an ad hoc basis. The well-disposed offer of one editor to another only worked before DRV as an informal deal of sorts, based on trust. DRV is a formal process and can't reconstruct this unrealized agreement by readding strongly undesirable content onto the site. It would have been much better for Rejoy2003 to have accepted the offer as it was a "generous" offer. The offer should be considered wasted. Just keep deleted.—Alalch E. 01:45, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment, I had made my mind about taking this article two days ago, like I had highlighted to it to Smokey. I'm grateful for everyone that has been involved in this DRV. Especially the admins for helping me understand about this much better since I didn't really understand what "tone" was that the article seemed promotional. I'm willing to have this article rather draftified than completely salting it. I want to improve and add encyclopaedic content on Wikipedia, this was completely not my intent to write down promotional content. I hope the admins will continue to place their trust in me and having fix this salvageable article, as stated by Cryptic. Thank you Rejoy2003(talk) 07:01, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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