This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
- Whose work are you reviewing? GrahamRossmore
- Link to draft you're reviewing: Draft:Daka skull
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? No
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?no
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?no
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?no
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?concise
Lead evaluation: I don't know if you added a lead anywhere i can only see the origins addition you added.
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes
- Is the content added up-to-date?yes
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?no
Content evaluation: content is relevant and up-to-date, but there isn't enough.
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral?yes
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?no
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?no
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?no
Tone and balance evaluation: balanced and without bias
[edit]Sources and References
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
- Are the sources current? yes
- Check a few links. Do they work? yes
Sources and references evaluation
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? no
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes
Organization evaluation: good structure
[edit]Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
- Are images well-captioned?
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
For New Articles Only
[edit]If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
- How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
- Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
- Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
New Article Evaluation
[edit]Overall impressions
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?yes
- What are the strengths of the content added?
- How can the content added be improved?
Overall evaluation: The additions you added to the origin are great and were needed, but thats all i can see in your sandbox draft so you may wanna add to the word count.
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