This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
- Whose work are you reviewing? Coleen - Autism Spectrum
- Link to draft you're reviewing: Autism spectrum
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Yes
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, the content is relevant to the article about Autism Spectrum
- Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There are vast amounts of information provided on this topic. It is a wonderful resource and I believe it would offer a good understanding to someone who is searching the internet for more information about Autism. I do not see any information that does not belong or information that is missing.
Content evaluation: Overall good content!
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral? Yes, the content added was neutral and not biased
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No
Sources and References
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
- Are the sources current? Yes
- Check a few links. Do they work? Yes
Sources and references evaluation: all sources that were checked worked well were good sources
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? I did not find any grammar issues
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes
Organization evaluation: Overall it was organized well
[edit]Overall impressions
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes, the content was very informative and offered wonderful information to users researching the topic of Autism
- What are the strengths of the content added? I enjoyed the information added about bullying. This aspect of Autism (or any disorder) is not usually talked about often and I believe it is very important to bring to the forefront!! Wonderful contribution idea.
- How can the content added be improved? I do not see any improvements that need to be added.