The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:28, 10 June 2018 (UTC)
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Created by Flowerpiep (talk). Self-nominated at 11:34, 21 May 2018 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: - Not required, less than 5 DYKs
Overall: Jytdog (talk) 03:07, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
@Jytdog: Hello and thank you for providing the review! First of all, I apologise for the late reply. Second, I trimmed the "Frozen" subsection. Still, regarding the sources, I am afraid I cannot find the exact sources for everything that is written there since this is a film's summary. If this had been, for example, the summary of a series, I would have added the exact episode for every sentence that needed to be sourced, but since this is a film, I cannot do much when it comes to the sources. The source at the end of this subsection provides a brief summary of the plot up to a certain point, and thus I decided to add it at the end of the last paragraph as a general source for what is written throughout this subsection. If you would like, I can try to find more sources like this one, but they would also need to be added at the end of this subsection since they would most likely be general as well. Furthermore, I tried to trim the "Critical reviews" subsection and organised it in three shorter paragraphs instead of two longer ones (in order to make sure that it can be easily read), each paragraph covering a separate subtopic regarding the character. Is it all right like this? And of course I would consider a hook similar to the one you suggested. How about this one — ALT5:... that the animation team of the film Frozen tried to model the movements of character Sven based on a real-life reindeer, but due to its lack of motion, they used the behavior of a dog instead? Source: [5] Regarding the QPQ, I know that if somebody has less than 5 DYK credits, they do not have to follow the QPQ rule. Right now, I only have 2 DYK credits. Flowerpiep (talk) 00:46, 8 June 2018 (UTC)Flowerpiep