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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:41, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Four Out of Five[edit]

  • Reviewed: Kahk
  • Comment: I can come up with an ALT1 if this hook doesn't suffice for whatever reason.

Converted from a redirect by EL Foz87 (talk) and Jimmio78 (talk). Nominated by Aria1561 (talk) at 22:10, 22 May 2018 (UTC).

  • @EL Foz87, Jimmio78, and Aria1561: The hook is quite difficult to understand and not really clear enough to be catchy or "hooky". From what I can tell, the hook is saying that the Tranquility Base Hotel & Casion's taqueria got a rating of four out of five, a fact that's not in the article. For these reasons, the hook is struck; a new hook is needed here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:50, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
It is not hard to understand and definitely sourced in the Composition section, but I'll come up with an ALT1 anyway because I don't want to fight it. Aria1561 (talk) 03:54, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
@Narutolovehinata5: Footnote added. Aria1561 (talk) 22:39, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
Thanks, now approving. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:30, 22 June 2018 (UTC)