- Just a quick note Northamerica1000; are you sure you want the reference [34], to Myrtle Beach Restaurant News? First, entering the domain name redirects to another page, beckybillingsley.com; and second, the other page at Becky's website has a "file not found" error. I'd recommend simply removing that reference, as you have another reference already for that statement. Kylo, Rey, & Finn Consortium, now featuring BB-8 (talk) 23:53, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
Returned from prep for further work, per discussion at WT:DYK. Yoninah (talk) 18:56, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
- Per that discussion, here are two alternative hooks using other sourced statements in the article.184.147.117.244 (talk) 19:58, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1
... that cheese soup is traditional in America, Colombia, Switzerland and Tibet?
- ALT2
... that chefs use special cooking techniques to prevent cheese soup from burning?
- Re ALT2, I think the concern is not only burning but curdling, which suggests to me another option (that may need article edits but which is true, as I understand:
ALT3: ... that preparing cheese requires curdling, but in preparing cheese soup a bain-marie is often used to help avoid curdling?
- I'm suggesting it as an option because curdling is usually thought of as bad, but it can and is used to make things too. I'll drop a note on the nominator's talk page to let her / him know that this has been pulled from prep. EdChem (talk) 13:16, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
- Hi EdChem, the article only mentions burning or scorching.184.147.117.244 (talk) 00:04, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- @184.147.117.244: I didn't check, I just suggested something which I know is accurate. A search on cheese soup and curdling will confirm the issue and point to a suitable reference, I believe. If the submitter wants to use ALT3, s/he can make changes. EdChem (talk) 07:16, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
- I have struck ALT3 because source searches haven't yielded anything yet to qualify this. I have added some new alts below. North America1000 21:43, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
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