The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Yoninah (talk) 09:44, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
Ineligible per previous ITN appearance

A Christmas Carol

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Charles Dickens in 1842
Charles Dickens in 1842

Improved to Good Article status by The Bounder (talk). Self-nominated at 22:26, 11 May 2017 (UTC).

  • Date and length fine. However i do have a problem with the hook. There is so many rich grounds for a hook in this article about one of the most famous Dickens plays and this is the one chosen? I think we can do a bit better than this for a great literary text. Something about Scrooge or the 3 ghosts? IF @The Bounder: disagrees, I'll be happy to pass it as QPQ done and no close paraphrasing with the picture licence fine. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 11:12, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you The C of E. I did think about a few alternatives, but most people are aware of most of the story and characters, and anything more "interesting" moves too far into third party opinions. This aspect of the public readings is giving factual information that most people are unaware of, and is an interesting enough point in its own right. All the best, The Bounder (talk) 11:49, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
  • @The Bounder: I understand your reasoning, but I agree with The C of E here. A "factual" hook does not give the reader any incentive to click on the article, since he's got all the facts in front of him. A clever/emotional/surprising hook, on the other hand, makes him want to click on it! Yoninah (talk) 00:08, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
  • I have given my explanation and my thoughts and I would prefer that this hook be the one that goes through. Its interest lies in it being an aspect few people had have any idea. Because of that, it is surprising to many. – The Bounder (talk) 05:38, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Well then, I'll restore the tick, but I won't be the one to promote it. Yoninah (talk) 13:31, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
Returning from prep for further discussion of hook. A short discussion has been going on here. Yoninah (talk) 18:04, 24 May 2017 (UTC)
ALT 1 ... that Dickens developed A Christmas Carol in his head while taking night-time walks of 15 to 20 miles around London?
ALT 2 ... that the character of Ebenezer Scrooge in A Christmas Carol has been considered to have been based on Dickens's fears about himself?
ALT 3 ... that all 6,000 copies of the first edition of A Christmas Carol were sold within five days?
ALT 4 ... that within two months of the publication of A Christmas Carol, there were eight rival theatrical productions of it in London?
ALT 5 ... that it was A Christmas Carol that popularised the phrase "Merry Christmas" among the Victorian public?

And I haven't even got to the end of the article. The nominator's hook is the dullest possible hook and the image is (literally) dull and unappealing at main page size. BencherliteTalk 18:09, 24 May 2017 (UTC)

That settles it. As the topic has been repeatedly run in OTD (e.g on 17 Dec 2004), then it is not eligible for DYK per 1e, "Articles that have featured (bold link) previously ... in a blurb on the main page's ... On this day ...are ineligible." Thanks to The Bounder for suggesting it and for his work of improving the article. As noted, the page will continue to be read in large numbers regardless and so this work has not been wasted. Andrew D. (talk) 09:33, 28 May 2017 (UTC)