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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 11:08, 15 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article meets the high-quality I've come to expect from your articles on wildlife, and I'm completely satisfied it also meets all the requirements for GA. I'll mention a couple things which I'm not even sure have to be changed, though they did stand out.

• There's a noticeable lack of wikilinks in the first paragraph in the lead, and the first paragraph in the Description section. It's not necessarily an issue, though it did strike me almost immediately. Perhaps you could link Crown (anatomy)? Up to you.
• You've got "185 meters" and "2400m" in the same sentence. Should these measurements of distance be formatted consistently?
• Should "900m-1950m" have an en dash instead of a hyphen? That question isn't rhetorical; I'm not actually sure.

Well done and congratulations on another fantastic addition to Wikipedia. Freikorp (talk) 11:08, 15 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Many thanks, Freikorp. I've implemented your suggestions. Vanamonde (talk) 11:40, 15 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]