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Same problems as on the Essex County, NJ page. This actually has the potential to be a decent article, but its really a mess right now, and I don't want to get some feedback on the following....
1) No references or sources cited anywhere.
2) Most of the article's first section smacks of emperical observation/original research that's difficult or impossible to verify:
3) Weasel words:
I don't mean to be a pain, this article just doesn't sit well with me, and I am unsure how to make it better. I think the second part of the article is a good start, in that Newark was settled very early, and it really hasn't been until the 60s and later, and after they built Interstate 280 that West Essex has seen its tremendous growth. Roodog2k 19:35, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
Having spent a considerable amount of time reviewing this article I agree with all the comments made by Roodog2k. I suggest this article be incorporated into the Essex Country article which already has a substantial section on Western Essex and one which is far more well written and which will be much easier to edit into submission. Shaztastic (talk) 05:07, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
These have been moved here from a subpage as part of a cleanup process. See Wikipedia:Discontinuation of comments subpages.
I have assessed this article as Start-class and identified the following areas for improvement:
shirulashem (talk) 16:36, 28 December 2008 (UTC)