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In the "Response section, second paragraph, the sentence "He observed that the most common censorship trigger was a story that criticized the school or that the administration perceived to make them look bad." could be rephrased to "He observed that the most common censorship trigger was a story that criticized the school or one that the administration perceived as making them look bad." for a smoother clarity and flow. 750h+ (talk) 05:39, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also in the Response section, where it says "In November 2022, New York City schools chancellor David Banks was asked about the incident during a roundtable discussion with student journalists from local schools. Banks stated:", change "Banks stated" to "He stated", since we already know that you are talking about Banks. 750h+ (talk) 05:43, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"The suit was dismissed on October 16, 2023 in an order by federal senior judge John M. Gerrard. Gerrard determined that Pennell could not prove injury because having already graduated, the shutting down of the paper no longer impacted him. Nebraska ACLU's Rose Godinez disagreed with Gerrard's finding that the plaintiffs lacked standing; she emphasized that the ruling was narrowly focused on standing and "we welcome its general warning to school administrators on restricting speech in student newspapers", supported by this source, which is correct.
"SPLC executive director Hadar Harris said that this was not the only case of censorship of a school newspaper in the state, writing that "Nebraska has become a center for a number of egregious censorship cases in recent years, but the Saga's case also indicates a nationwide trend of administrators increasingly censoring LGBTQIA+ related content, including chosen names and pronouns".", supported by this source, which also is correct.
"In February 2023, The Independent reported that English teacher Alex Hull had taken over teaching the journalism class and was the new adviser to the paper, but the Viking Saga had not yet resumed publication.", supported by this source, correct.
"Margaret Renkl, in a New York Times guest essay, observed that the Viking Saga had "at least three transgender staff members"", supported by this source, also correct.
Viking Saga June 2022.jpg is a fair use image, displaying the newspaper of that school. Northwest High School (cropped).jpg is a 4.0 image showing the location at which the event took place. Image review passed. 750h+ (talk) 06:14, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
750h+ Thank you for the review. I've addressed the issues you noted above. RoySmith(talk) 14:42, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you RoySmith. I am happy to pass this article as good. Congrats! 750h+ (talk) 14:44, 10 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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