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In the spirit of a neutral point of view, this article should be moved to Planetary engineering. The term, terraforming, is inaccurate and anthropocentric. --Viriditas 21:19, 9 Sep 2004 (UTC)
The ethical issues section should begin with responsibility. Terraforming science and engineering has not yet been demonstrated on Earth. Worldwide, scientists and engineers confronted with increasing climate changes, recognize their incapacity to understand, model and even help in the maintenance of planet Earth. The planet we live on is loosing its healthy balance because of our ignorance. What good would be that ignorance in terraforming other planets. The emergency for intelligent ideas and actions is right here on this planet Earth. Unless this earthlings responsibilty ethical issue does not apply on wikipedia, another planet alltogether? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 132.156.50.153 (talk) 23:25, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
I have added some more information to the ethical issues section, but it needs clarification and references to noted authors (claimants). In the near future, it may be worthy to export this section to a new article (Ethics of terraforming) which is why I'm in the process of summarizing and distilling each view to their main points. It's actually a little more difficult than it looks since there is some overlap between each position and they are not as sharply delineated as they might first appear. --Viriditas 23:28, 4 Oct 2004 (UTC)
I agree with Bryan. Terraforming is the heading most users will think of and they will likely give up before they find it under other titles.Ccpoodle 15:12, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
This is the place to discuss the article. Where would be a place to discuss the subject as such?
(Speculate about methods of terraforming, discussing the conditions and mecanisms by which they work or the obstacles that would make them fail.)
84.160.196.73 11:23, 13 Mar 2005 (UTC)
Terraforming, in my opinion, is a minor ethical issue. To counter the first post, I'd say that 'messing with another planet' can be very easily managed, because it is not being conducted by a company looking for a cost-effective means of accomplishing his goals. What I mean to say is, if NASA, or even Virgle goes to, say Mars, they're doing it for the sake of exploring the planet, and will only use terraforming to make it easier to do that. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.169.101.6 (talk) 22:37, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
don't know where to put this. The article seems to take the THEORY of evolution as a fact, even though it hasn't been proven (on the contrary, its been disproven multiple times) so I suggest removing all things that reference evolution, so as to not mislead the readers. Ex. (Three Billion Years ago) and also, before you reply snidely, Carbon dating becomes worthless on things over 2000 years old. signed, Steel —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.32.7.110 (talk) 17:19, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
82.6.1.85 (talk) 23:15, 25 March 2010 (UTC)Lance Tyrell
This should probably go under planetary engineering, but for the section about ethical issues somebody should discuss Rick Wernli's short story Colony, which appears in the anthology A Gathering of Flowers, edited by Joyce Carol Thomas. AGOF is published by HarperTrophy of HarperCollins Publishers. --Fighter 23:32, 6 September 2005 (UTC)
I'm the primary author of a terraforming paper published in the January 2009 Journal of the British Interplanetary Society titled "Shell Worlds:An Approach to Terraforming Moons, Small Planets, and Plutoids" I'd like to do some editing to this but am new to Wikipedia. Using this approach, most any airless body can be terraformed (or planetary engineered) to be very earthlike in every way except for gravity. KeniRoy (talk) 22:48, 10 September 2009 (UTC)
The article speaks of using comets. However has anyone any information on using ice-comets and let them rain down on Venus? Could an ice-comet (used from the Kuiper Belt maybe) be carefully brought over, broken in smaller pieces and brought down into the atmosphere? This would add water to the atmosphere and bring about a cooling and add to the creation of oceans. Which in turn help regulate a moderate temperature. Can anyone verify or correct this? Gryffindor 18:59, 3 November 2005 (UTC)
But what about a oblique asteroid impact to get Venus rotating in order to create a magnetic field? How big would it need to be and how fast would it need to be going? And say Venus has enough of an iron core to generate an adequate magnetic field, would a magnetic field, along with the help of some photosynthetic cloud seeded bacteria, be able to capture enough solar hydrogen in a reasonable period of time to start precipitating the Carbon out of the atmosphere, release the Oxygen and form water? It would be just the small matter of nudging an asteroid or comet at the right time onto a collision course with Venus with enough precision to make it an oblique hit and then to seed the clouds with a type of bacteria that could stay aloft long enough to convert the atmosphere to Oxygen. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Psoreilly (talk • contribs) 09:30, 6 March 2006
Re the part about Venus being usuitable for space elevators: wouldn't it be possible to have the space elevator rotate with respect to the winds, rather than the surface and stop the tether before the surface (and maybe the sulfuric acid clouds as well)? Here is a suggested rewrite for that sections: "Venus' extremely slow rotation means that space elevators would have to rotate with respect to the 100 metres per second winds, requiring a tether on the order of 100,000 kilometres long..." if people think that's reasonable someone could stick it in. Felix Dance 07:14, 3 December 2005 (UTC)
What portion of Venus' temperature is a result of incoming solar radiation? Would there be any benefit to reducing it by some degree, e.g. by placing an occulting device in orbit for some degree of time, perhaps something along the lines of a solar sail? Even a small degree like 10 or 25%? I was recently reading of the work on [nanoFETs] and thought they might provide an ideal combined solar-cell and station keeping thruster for a lightweight sail. Kfsone 08:06, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
Is it not theoretically possible to entirely vaporize Venus' atmosphere? What would be the effect of a 1000 km radius meteorite/asteroid hitting Venus for example? perhaps what might be classified as a small moon? Or perhaps a smaller (but still large) object propelled to velocities yet unobserved in the solar system? I think it might be a fairly small margin between causing the surface crust to turn into rock vapor and completely destroying the planet, however... There might also be problems of whether this would change the orbit of Venus. I think it would be a lot of fun to run some calculations on this. I am also assuming the crust would cool within a few years/months. 76.19.29.52 (talk) 20:48, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
This isn't so much a question about the document itself, but instead about the subject of it.
I need an expert opinion on whether or not an Earth-like planet (in other words, one capable of supporting human life) could form on its own WITHOUT having any indigenous species on it, seeing as how thats how Earth got its current atmosphere, and to some extent climate.
I would prefer an "expert" of some sort to answer my question, but if this is impractical, than anyone who can contribute a fairly decent answer should do so. Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.170.90.50 (talk • contribs) 03:55, 7 February 2006
You know, Ganymede (moon) has a thin oxygen atmosphere and it doesn't have life, so maybe it is possible. It has somethign to do with all the Jovian radiation screwing with the water ice on Ganymede and spliting it into hydrogen and oxygen, where the hydrogen is lost to space because it's so light. Couldn't this happen on another planet, too? When you say oxygen would "quickly be bound into solid substances by chemical reactions", do you mean things like iron? What if this hypothetical planet didn't have that much iron? I'm no "expert", but I think this just might be distantly possible. Anyone care to tell me why I'm wrong? Nick Warren 08:39, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
As far as known, there is no way any human habitable environment would not, (at least eventually) generate life. Every environment observed on Earth that can support life has been populated. From volcanic deep-sea vents, to icy depths of Antarctica, to the darkest acidic cavern pools-- life seems to arisen. Humans can only live in conditions much milder than this. Plus, the vast majority of our atmospheric oxygen comes from the action of photosynthesis and respiration of algae. 76.19.29.52 (talk) 21:21, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
Ah, but that's because they're on Earth. As far as we know, Life has only arisen once on Earth and the descendants of that life has come to populate every corner of the planet. As far as we know, life only started once int he entire Universe, though it's very likely that it's shown up in other places as well. I'll be that when we do discover alien life, we'll find that it's extremely different form Earth life and it may cause us to look for an alternate definition of life.
As for chemicals bonding with oxygen. what if there was some continuing non-biological process on a planet that constantly generated more oxygen than that which became bound to elements in the ground? They've detected Methane gas in Mars' atmosphere, yet it shouldn't be there since there is nothing producing it. It's likely that that methane is being produced by non-biological forces that we don't know about and it's being produced at a rate that's faster than it's being broken down. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atmosphere_of_Mars#Methane
So couldn't some weird geological process create oxygen? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Nick Warren (talk • contribs) 04:49, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
I'd like to see this as a featured article. How about submitting it for peer review? Mithridates 17:37, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
I concur. This is an exceptional article and it should be brought to the atention of the general public, who seems to not be very knowledgeable on such subjects and would be delighted to hear that things like this just might happen in the not-so-distant future. This is a great article.Nick Warren 09:18, 24 February 2006 (UTC)
One fact that can be updated: the term "terraforming" was invented in 1942, not 1949; see http://www.jessesword.com/sf/list/?page=11 and http://www.jessesword.com/sf/list/?page=12 which list Jack Williamson quotes for different forms of the verb and noun. I'll do the update if no one else does; don't have time just this second. Mike Christie 15:57, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
I am of quite other opinion than Mithridates. I think it is almost 100% certain, that it is impossible, so the whole subject is mere science fiction. Why? Mars is about 1,5 times more far away from the sun and therefore gets 1,5 x 1,5 times less solar energy per square meter than we. This is the basic reason, why Mars is about 60 degress colder than earth. It is mainly not due to lack of atmosphere or such. Assumed, Mars would be for one day of same temperature as earth, by whatever methods achieved, this would go within one day and one night. Mars nights are colder than -100 centigrades! --Hans W 16:30, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
Even if you could manage to find a way to hold the atmosphere to the planet, the lack of a magnetic field would mean that any life on the surface living out in the open would be subject to unhindered solar and cosmic radiation. Life would become unviable very quickly. Wrey 9:52 p.m. Feb 7, 2008
I agree, but there are still two ways to get around this: first, I'm pretty sure that the mars atmosphere would blow away relatively slowly, allowing us to add water and other gasses periodically to sustain life. Another way would be to live in lava tunnels underground, where we would be able to encase ourselves with a breathable atmosphere to survive. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.169.101.6 (talk) 22:44, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
The article doesn't really delve into how Mars gets all this water. From by understanding, water molecules are locked in the ice caps and some of it underground. Yet these artist impressions show it with as much water as Earth. Could someone take a shot at explaing this to me or directing me to an article that has already explained this? Also, this article focuses mainly on Venus and Mars...but I heard that Europa could also be a candidate...is this true? Sean WI 02:01, 3 April 2006 (UTC)
One question to be considered is the practicalities/cost. All other things being equal, Mars (some atmosphere, possibility of some permafrost etc) would be significantly cheaper to terraform than the Moon (no atmosphere) or Venus (get rid of heat, unpleasant atmosphere, excessive ground level pressure etc).
Some level of landscape development/transformation would be possible on most worlds with a solid and stable surface - setting up a base (whether or not involving domes), mining and mineral extraction etc. At what stage does landscape/atmospheric transformation become terraforming?
Going back to the ethical question mentioned above - what would the ethics be of an extraterrestial world that was somewhere between Earth and Mars - ie conditions are sufficient to let simple life (single cell etc) develop but are deteriorating?
Jackiespeel 17:57, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
The water also comes from Permafrost according to a PBS video. The rising tempurature would cause the permafrost to melt and water would rise. Rk589 (talk) 23:31, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
--Um, excuse me, but I hope I'm not intruding If I answer the question in this section. :P To answer, I'm pretty sure you are right. Mars does not have as much water as earth. However, there are ways getting water on Mars ourselvs. First, Mars is also abundant in CO2 and other compounds, which we can use (at first) to get drinkable water. TO get water in vast quantities, we have only to look to space. The rings of Saturn are made up of ice and rock, which we may be able to transport across the solar system to Mars. (What do ya think about that for an answer?) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.169.101.6 (talk) 22:51, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
A few of us have been trying to start up a new Wikipedia:WikiProject Space Colonization (shortcut WP:SPACE) to organize work on topics of direct relevance to Terraforming. Hop on over if you're interested. - Reaverdrop 16:07, 10 May 2006 (UTC) It seems to me that if you wanted to be effective with Mars keeping an atmosphere. You would need to get it a larger moon to cause more heat in the core. A larger moon would pull on the surface which would get the core going again. It would give it a shield again. It also occurs to me that if we could get it spinning faster gravity would increase holding the atmosphere in. Then we could look toward terraforming. Why am I wrong? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Prasalowicz1134 (talk • contribs) 01:55, 4 March 2010 (UTC)
Due to recent events, shouldn't Ceres be labelled as a Dwarf Planet? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.34.182.167 (talk • contribs) 11:23, 26 August 2006
Something in the section "Theoretical methods of terraforming", subsection "Converting atmosphere" is confusing me. A sentence reads:
Forgive a the ignorance of a layman, but doesn't an ocean decrease a planet's albedo? According to the article on albedo, oceans are one of the most light-absorbing features a planet can have, with an albedo of around 3.5%. Wouldn't introducing an ocean to most planets allow less solar radiation to be reflected back into space? The assertation of this sentence strikes me as false. Is there something I am not understanding here? Kevyn 03:41, 27 August 2006 (UTC)
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At some point articles for individual terraforming candidates (Venus, Mars, etc) got split out of this article, but it looks like much of the detail was left behind. Many of the subsections of the "Theoretical methods of terraforming" section are written with specific planets in mind. I'm going to start redistributing that material now, this section should probably instead focus on more general concepts rather than specific plans. Bryan 04:37, 25 December 2006 (UTC)
"There is a conspiracy theory that an alien race is terraforming Earth through the emissions of our internal combustion engines and the resultant global warming." Why is this there. There is no link, nothing. I'm getting rid of it unless anyone thinks it should stay
I removed phenomenon.org and the ((cleanup-spam)) marker.--Jimktrains 20:33, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
I know of a couple more examples of terraforming in popular culture (Trigun and Red Planet, but looking at the Popular Culture section I started to think that maybe it should actually be cut down. Thoughts?--DavidFuzznut 06:14, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
Also in the movie Total Recall, aliens built a device to melt Mars icey core and turn it into oxygen but didn't activate the device because it would of destroyed Mars natural resources. 75.68.242.254user:daedalus779|Shawn May 10th 2007
Removed Hitchhikers Guide reference. In this storyline, the earth was completely built by the magratheans. From the ground... er... core up. And thus is not a terroformed planet.--Captaintim 14:27, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
Is the Dune_(novel) serie from Frank Herbert not containing at least a hint of terraforming like type of actions on planets (at least on Arakis)? Tourist.tam (talk) 09:50, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I propose lowering the "Importance to Space exploration" setting for this article from "High" to "Mid". Although the topic is of great importance to the future of human activity in space, it is not an "exploration" topic per se, and there are no terraforming missions currently scheduled for the next decade or so. Would anyone object to this? Sdsds 04:24, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
The term was probably coined by Jack Williamson in a science-fiction story published in 1942 in Astounding Science Fiction,[1] but the actual concept pre-dates this work.
Was it really 1942? In the german Wikipedia its published in 1951. Who is right? --84.154.213.159 18:30, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
I'll come back in a week and check the feedback and decide the outcome.
Ittiz 03:44, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
What's going on with this "double article"? I.e., it has two tables of content, etc. Is there a reason for this, or should some attempt be made to combine these into one? Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 15:13, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
Less than 30% of the Earth's surface is inhabitable by humans. Would a section on terraforming regions of the Earth which modern humans find quite uncomfortable/inhospitable (deserts, shallow seas, etc.) be appropriate here? The Zuiderzee was terraformed into Flevoland (often called "reclaimed", although the area had not previously been human-occupied); there have been various ideas for irrigating the Sahara, etc. samwaltz 22:26, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
By placing drought resistant algae in the upper atmosphere of venus it would be possible to reduce some of the CO2. When the algae increase in numbers they will function as a solar shield.T.Neo 10:49, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
Yeah, it is kind of my own research and I wasnt planning to add it anyway. It makes sense, venus has 0.0002 percent water in the atmoshere (cite: encyclopaedia britannica 2006 digital thing). Is this enough to support hardy desert microbes? T.Neo 12:41, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
Hmmm.... you are right. But putting a huge solar shield to cool it would probably be impossible (similar sheilds have been proposed to cool the earth). And "disrupting an ice moon of saturn"? Even with far fetched technology this would (probably) be impossible, nevertheless the thought of vandalizing the moon system of saturn. I have realized where all the hydrogen on venus went: sulfuric acid. Have a method of putting zinc in the atmospere and it will react to the sulfuric acid and realese hydrogen. Then mix the hydrogen with oxygen and produce water (get oxygen from the CO2). The carbon could then be made into some sort of building material. Only one problem: will the product of the zinc- acid reaction (zinc sulfate, I think) degrade in the low altitude conditions? T.Neo 09:17, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
Think about this: using carbon dioxide from venus to create an atmosphere on a moon of jupiter. Then, use nuclear fusion reactors to heat up the atmospheres. Similar to the idea of turning a gas giant like jupiter into a star to warm its moons but much more feasible. The carbon dioxide traps heat so the whole moon could be brought to earth like temeratures. These object are to far from the sun to be heated by it,so add temperature to it artificially. T.Neo 15:38, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
The image that was just removed ("Is there life on Europa?") is apparently a copyright violation; see this New Scientist page. If someone can tag it, that would be great; I'm at work and can't take the time to dig out the right tag. I'll get to it if nobody else does. Mike Christie (talk) 17:58, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
The cost for a project of this scale would be ridiculous! Would it really be worth it to spend maybe trillions of (currency) to work on this project? It does seem possible but we humans should be focusing on events today and do terraforming as a last resort. Another thing to note is the amount of time it will take. 100-500 years apparently. Also we should notice that the human body experiences a loss in bone and muscle mass while in extended periods in space for the body has no need to fight gravity anymore and stops "exercising". I'm all for Terraforming but the econimcal strain it would put on us and the harsh atmosphere of Mars surely would make this a near immpossible project. Still we can try. Rk589 (talk) 23:27, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
We are of course, making gigantic, enourmous assumptions about future technologies, tech capabilities, and of course future economics-- but I see no reason not to! The amount of time needed is also completely theoretical-- no one can imagine what kind of scientific advances might be made in, say, 100 to 500 years from now. Not long ago human flight, and of course human moon landing were seen as quite impossible too... It also seem entirely possible that unforeseen climate change, either natural, man-made or a combination, may create problems on Earth that might make colonizing other planets necessary. Sharing and recording the information for the what physical changes are necessary to accomplish terraforming might be very valuable-- and at least of educational value! 76.19.29.52 (talk) 20:39, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
I read somewhere, that some US office is sponsoring such "research". I think that more information about that is very interesting. If we all go bankrupt by such project, we taxpayers want to know about the people. --84.136.196.222 (talk) --Hans W (talk) 15:46, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
I was wondering that along with asteroids that wont burn up since the moon has no atmosphere wouldnt solar wind make problems for colinization of the moon? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.74.219.178 (talk) 23:37, 12 December 2007 (UTC)
Added merge from request for Ecopoiesis and Planetary ecosynthesis to the history section. Those two articles have remained stubs for far too long, and I don't see any way to expand them outside this article. I'm open to other suggestions. —Viriditas | Talk 05:13, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
I've looked in the detailed articles and none of them seem to mention the problem because of a the lack of an ozone layer. Is it just because the other problems are so massive that no one has bothered to really consider the nitty gritty of stuff like the lack of an ozone layer or am I missing something or what? Nil Einne (talk) 09:59, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
Currently as written:
Other possible candidates for terraformation include Titan, Mercury, Ganymede, Io, Callisto, Luna (Earth's Moon), and even the dwarf planet Ceres.
In addition, aside from the Moon, most of these worlds are so far from the Sun that adding sufficient heat would be much more difficult than even Mars would be.
Last I knew Mercury wasn't cool but Very Hot, as I think, its closest to the sun. Or at least thats what they led me to believe in school. So why does Mercury need more heat for terraformation?
I would say it should be dropped Larek (talk) 20:39, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
the side that isn't facing the sun is VERY cold. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.226.147.39 (talk) 22:03, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Colonisation or terraforming certain planets seems a much easier task compared to Venus, although the final result may seem a far better choice. The Moon, Callisto, Ganymede, Titan and Mercury will be settled long before Venus. It's only Mars that is usually put ahead of Venus. I even think that the Moon will be colonised before Mars, Venus and other planets.
Should there be a comparison of groups of planets with similar difficulties or based on gravity, temperature, atmospheric pressure and structure? --Anatoli (talk) 01:01, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
This article has a major problem with citations. For a topic that is rooted in hard science, the number of references is extremely low. The article is filled with various in-line tags. It is a well written article, but it is too full of unverified claims, what appears to be opinions and possible original research at the time being. --Pstanton (talk) 03:57, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
After reading through the article several times, I concede I went overboard. While this article still does have some citation issues, I tagged far too many common knowledge statements, and most of the citation issues can be rectified easily. I'm closing as kept. --Pstanton (talk) 20:28, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
I removed the header from the talkspace. In light of the circumstances, I didn't add it to the history. ~ Amory (talk) 15:23, 7 June 2009 (UTC)
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The following sentence makes no sense:
"Even this would be seen as a type of terraforming to the strictest of ecocentrists, whom would say that all life has the right, in its home biosphere, to evolve at its own pace as well as its own direction, free of any outside interference."
It is impossible for something to evolve "at its own pace as well as its own direction, free of any outside interference". If there is no outside interference, how can there be mutations, and how can there be natural selection? And what does "at its own pace as well as its own direction" mean, as if there's some intrinsic future evolution for different organisms? 86.170.39.5 (talk) 17:46, 31 December 2009 (UTC)
It's much more likely that we'll just be genetically/chemically engineering organisms to suit these environments rather than changing the entire planet to suit the organisms. Is there a name for this? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.167.70.126 (talk) 04:36, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
This BBC article details efforts by Charles Darwin, Joseph Hooker, Kew Gardens and the Royal Navy to transform Ascension Island. In the article the author describes the work as the 'world's first experiment in "terra-forming"' and Dr Dave Wilkinson, an ecologist at Liverpool John Moores University, "thinks that the principles that emerge from that experiment could be used to transform future colonies on Mars".
Anybody have any objections to adding this to the article? I was thinking a possibly renamed History of scholarly study section would be the best place. LunarLander // talk // 15:36, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
The artists' conceptions of terraformed Mars, Venus and Moon in the chapter "Prospective planets" all show surfaces dominated by water oceans. This seems dubious to me: since these bodies presently contain almost no surface water, and humans prefer solid ground to live on anyway, terraforming them would in all likelyhood result in only small fractions (maybe 10%) of their respective surfaces covered with water IMO (mainly seas and lakes, rather than a world ocean). It would be very nice if someone could change the images accordingly (or replace them with images with less water, like the last Mars image in the lead). --Roentgenium111 (talk) 19:03, 7 September 2010 (UTC)
If I knew what "a alien organization (covenant) glassing" means, would I find it relevant? —Tamfang (talk) 22:10, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
This article contains several issues, that is why I have lowered its assessment status and requested improvements.--Novus Orator 09:14, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
IF this article is wholly true in its saying that Venus has an atmosphere too thick, and Mars an atmosphere too thin, then, what would it take to "bottle-up" Venus' atmosphere, and release it on Mars? Both planets could be terraformed at the same time. A series of "interplanetary train-cars" could be on a continual route between Venus and Mars, say, 20 or so, with one each at their respective planet, and 9 en route to Mars to de-gas, and 9 en route to Venus to re-fill? Mr. RUDOLPH 76.90.229.237 (talk) 10:36, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
“ | In the video game Halo (2001) .... The rings are created using Forerunner technology, and terraformed during their construction by an extra-galactic construct known as The Ark or Installation 00. | ” |
Is either Forerunner (Halo) or The Ark (Halo) relevant to this article? Am I enlightened by knowing the name of the fictional technology or the fictional agent that carries out the fictional task? —Tamfang (talk) 03:19, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
It seems that the goal of making a planet more Earth-like would be to make it more inhabitable by Earthlings specifically, rather than any terrestrial animal, which is a broader term for any organism that lives on land (as opposed to sea). Doniasis
More explicitly, I think it's not the right term to use for two reasons: 1) It assumes that the only terrestrial organisms that exist are those from Earth; a point which has not been thoroughly proven, and/or 2) We wouldn't want Earthly aquatic animals to make the jump to the new planet Doniasis (talk) 23:27, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Would it be easy to terraform a gas giant like Jupiter? --68.103.31.159 (talk) 00:36, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
What Zod and his lackeys are doing towards the end of Man of Steel certainly is planetary engineering, but it is in no way TERRAforming/Earth-shaping. It is actually Krypton-shaping, a process with entirely different goal. 195.250.144.226 (talk) 12:31, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
There is no proof that any of this speculation about terraforming would actually work, and absolutely no way to prove it without undertaking an impossible planet-wide transformation. Might as well lump this with UFOs and the Loch Ness monster. Kortoso (talk) 16:53, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
This article has random snippets of miscellaneous articles throughout it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.243.154.38 (talk) 00:41, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
The TV show & Video Game Defiance should be mentioned as the whole backstory revolves around Terraforming. --Mando Salama (talk) 14:11, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
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Unless I have misread it, there appears to be a conservative, 'no can do' bias in the article (albeit perhaps reflecting that of the outside world, the scientific community, and the latter's funding/priorities/current intellectual fashions). It seems to emphasise the impossibility/difficulty/expense of terraforming because of the inhospitality of other planets to humans. But this anthropocentrism obscures the existence of extremophiles, documented elsewhere in Wikipedia, for whom these conditions are tolerable, and overlooks their possible role in gradually terraforming other planets almost naturally, therefore.--81.135.29.129 (talk) 18:31, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
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This reference: "Mercury. The Society. The Society. 29. Retrieved 10 January 2017." is very unclear. The link seems to go to the German version of Google books. No author or date is given, and it's not even clear what the link is to: a magazine? A book? Michael-Zero (talk) 21:11, 30 January 2017 (UTC)
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I've added the term "terraformation" to the lead. It is a valid alternative form of "terraforming" used by various sources. The article itself uses a source whose title uses the term: http://www.nexialquest.com/The%20Terraformation%20of%20Worlds.pdf Plus:
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The section on solar radiation strikes me as rather biased and misleading. "This also makes any kind of travel to Mars (or anywhere else) near impossible. Humans staying on Mars for even the shortest time would be reduced to living well beneath the planet's surface. This issue is conveniently left out of interstellar travel discussions among NASA, Space X and other organizations that rely heavily on the prospect of future travel to Mars." The problem is that NASA absolutely has addressed the issue of interplanetary and Martian radiation. Most forms of this radiation are easy to shield against; for instance, alpha particles. For more dangerous and penetrating radiation, such as gamma ray bursts, NASA has proposed that something as simple as a small shelter on the spacecraft would be sufficient. On the Martian surface, NASA has also proposed sending modular buildings to the planet before astronauts even arrived. Should technology develop, they've even suggested using robots to build shelters out of the regolith on the planet, providing sufficient shelter against radiation. I would suggest at least providing some counter-evidence to this paragraph to be more representative of the issue. TheBarracuda99 (talk) 12:31, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
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Hi everyone—I am the student editor assigned to this page. I will be working on expanding the "Terraforming Venus" section. I appreciate getting a chance to work on this article with you all. Ebhughes20 (talk) 23:16, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
Is it just me, or do all of the "artist conceptions" appear to be a different formatting of Venus? Maybe someone just got lazy with the cloud patterns, but that's a pretty obvious problem, given how they all have the same giant cloudy chevron... Cory of Earth (talk) 23:24, 10 August 2023 (UTC)