• "Links, all content" → "Links; all content"
• "crime (see references). As" → "crime. As" – don't reference to specific sections like this
• "Historical context and significance" – paragraph needs a reference
• There is no need for the " General" section if that's the only section in its parent section
• "in the Guardian Unlimited, TV Links shut down for linking:[10]" → "in the Guardian Unlimited, "TV Links shut down for linking":[10]" – add the quotes and remove the bold
• Format the references using ((cite web))

Gary King (talk) 04:47, 27 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Seven days have passed and there has been no effort to work on these issues, so this article has failed its Good Article nomination. Feel free to renominate it in the future. Gary King (talk) 05:12, 5 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]