Onsen Nozokimi Daisakusen is currently a Video games good article nominee. Nominated by AlexandraIDV at 20:43, 8 May 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: 2008 rhythm video game |
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Nominator: Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs) 20:43, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 22:00, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one on as soon as I can. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 22:00, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
@Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs)
1. Article is well-written.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the game.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses two fair use images with proper rationale.
-Looks good
-Looks good
-Looks good
-"as loved by the masses," I'd reword this a bit.
-I feel the "since the original Revelations: Persona," can be cut.
found the game shocking as a long-time fan of Persona--AlexandraIDV 06:13, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
-"In the end, Ikeya still found the game fun and exciting, and enjoyed the ending." I'd reword since this seems to be a separate review from the sentence it's connected to just prior.
This is the most bizarre thing, and I was not expecting this when taking on this review. In any case, article itself mostly looks fine, just patch the above and this should be good to go. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 22:50, 8 May 2024 (UTC)