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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:34, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Lead
- Link glacier, maybe? They're becoming less and less common.
- Per MOS:OVERLINK, I don't think you need to link Antarctica, especially not twice in the lead
- Link Marie Byrd Land Volcanic Province, it looks like it should probably be capitalized, too.
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Geography
- "and 1994 - 1995" - Per MOS:DATERANGE, use an endash and no spaces.
- Flood Range is overlinked multiple times
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Geology
- Marie Byrd Land is a duplink, as is mafic and ignimbrites
- " Ignimbrites are rare in Marie Byrd Land, the outcrop on the southeastern flank of Mount Berlin is a rare exception" - Semicolon, not a comma
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Local deposits
- Tons of overlinks in here: Merrem Peak, pyroclastic, tuffaceous, obsidian, pumice, hyaloclastite
- Is there a way to link or gloss welded vs. unwelded?
- Done, only through a Wiktionary link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Composition
- Lots of duplinks here, too: Mafic, Mefford Knoll, Wedemeyer Rocks, Brandenberger Bluff, basanyte, and trachyte
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Eruption history
- Duplinks: Wedemeyer Rocks, Mount Takahe, West Antarctic Ice Sheet, Mount Moulton, Mount Waesche, ice cores, West Antarctica
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Chronology
- "It may correspond to a 443,000±52,000 lava at Merrem Peak" - Lava what? Lave flow? Lava dome? Lava tube?
- Doesn't specify, presumably lava flow. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Argon-argon dating appears to be overlinked.
- Vostok is overlinked
- Link Siple Dome at the first mention, not the second. It's also overlinked in here.
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Categories
- Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
That's it, I think. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 23:39, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @Hog Farm:Done so far. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]