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In Reception, please change "demonstrating terror, fragility, and terror" to "demonstrating terror and fragility" or something else to get rid of the echo. Neftalirr (talk) 19:21, 13 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 15:28, 15 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Converted from a redirect by Rhain (talk). Self-nominated at 01:09, 14 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Look for the Light; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]
Article is new enough and long enough. Cursory look shows no uncited claims. QPQ is done. Overall, everything looks—uh, oh. Earwig is showing a 93% copyvio likelihood based on IMD? This is probably a false positive assuming the IMDB editor took the info from the wiki page, but I'll need you to get back to me before I properly pass it. Assuming it gets passed, I'd go with any of the given hooks, except ALT5, which isn't too interesting. ALT1 is a bit confusing; did they accept the request, film the alternate ending, then remove it, or did they refuse to make the alternate ending altogether? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 20:33, 14 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Krisgabwoosh: Thanks for the review! This is definitely a case of WP:MIRROR with IMDb; it's happened before with otherepisodes too. I've rephrased ALT1; hopefully it makes more sense. Let me know if there's anything else! – Rhain☔ (he/him) 23:37, 14 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Perfect, just making sure. Any of these alts look good to go. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 23:41, 14 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I like ALT4 and I know they are real giraffes or live giraffes because I made the connection to the Calgary Zoo in the article. But perhaps we need to explicitly state it in the article "real giraffes". Bruxton (talk) 15:26, 15 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
Several critics are named as Publication X's "Last name". For instance "Den of Geek's Boo" is mentioned three times, twice as "Den of Geek's Boo" in the last paragraph. Is there a better way to phrase it after the first mention? Perhaps as simply just Boo?
@OlifanofmrTennant: It has been three weeks since your last edit on this page. Do you plan to continue the review or should it be closed so the article can wait for a different reviewer? -- ZooBlazer 19:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@OlifanofmrTennant: Thanks for the review. To clarify your concerns: Den of Geek's Boo is a little repetitious but I believe it would be inconsistent and potentially confusing to rephrase, and the two uses are far apart anyway; EverythingGP is a local Grande Prairie publication, used here to verify uncontroversial production information; and there are several negative/critical comments in the Reception section, especially the last paragraph. Please let me know if you have any other questions or concerns. – Rhain☔ (he/him) 23:44, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I see the scattered negative thoughts. Upon looking through the sources it seems that you've taken as much as you can from the reviews. I specificlly called out Den of Geek at random, regardless I see your point. Questions?fourOlifanofmrtennant (she/her) 23:49, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]