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"Davies began his career.." football career (you mentioned previously that trained as a marine engineer)
"against England" suitable link?
"in 1919.[1] He made" merge, that first sentence is very brief.
"for their tie against" ***tie klaxon*** (just reading comments on my FAC from a Canadian ice hockey fan has reminded me that "tie" means all manner of different things...)
"attempt "There " probably needs some punctuation or some neat way of introducing this quote rather than just a run-on from the prose.
"In 1927, he was part of the.." I would move the link to the final to where you say final.
"his one season" maybe "only"
Link "kit" or people's heads will fall off.
I laughed at that far too much. Kosack (talk) 09:51, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Mostyn House School, Parkgate" comma after Parkgate.
"International goals" table is not sortable (?) so no need to relink things. If (however) you make it sortable, please relink the Home Championships each time.
@The Rambling Man: Thanks for another review. I've implemented all of the changes above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 09:51, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]