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Reviewer: Thine Antique Pen (talk · contribs ) 19:37, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[ reply ]
Just a suggestion, there is a reference in the lead. Remove this and summarise it in the article, as the lede is meant to summarise the article. Up to GA standard, however converting the quote to (( cquote )) can help with presentation. Not required though. I like this section, very detailed. Is referenced well and citations are filled in fully Detailed and cited well. Quite a big final paragraph, but that's fine! In Through the Looking-Glass Referenced well, good quotes and content. Other appearances in fiction and popular culture This section summarises quite a bit of the lede, which is fine! Cited well.
Right then, review done. I'll pass this as the article is in good shape , although there are some non-required things I listed above to improve presentation.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Is it reasonably well written ?
A. Prose quality:
B. MoS compliance for lead , layout , words to watch , fiction , and lists :
Is it factually accurate and verifiable ?
A. References to sources :
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
C. No original research :
Is it broad in its coverage ?
A. Major aspects:
B. Focused:
Is it neutral ?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable ?
No edit wars , etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales :
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions :
Overall :
Pass or Fail:
Grand job! ⇒T A P 19:37, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[ reply ]