5x expanded by Zingo156 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:05, 29 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Dora and the Fantastical Creatures; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply[reply]
This is my first time reviewing a DYK nomination, so I would like a second opinion on this.
- According to DYKcheck, you started 5x expanding on December 28, 2023. You nominated the article for DYK the day after, so it passes newness in this case.
- Article is long enough (4601 characters).
- The current hook you have proposed (ALT0) is not really interesting. I'd recommend that you come up with a new one.
- The article needs some work, especially in the "Reception" section. It uses the "X said Y" format, which is discouraged. See this essay for ideas.
- Earwig detected quotes used in the article that are properly cited to their sources.
Davest3r08 >:) (talk) 15:55, 18 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Zingo156 have you seen the above? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:11, 25 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Davest3r08 AirshipJungleman29 apologies for not answering speedily. Yeah, I will address the articles problems before the end of January. Zingo156 (talk) 07:41, 26 January 2024 (UTC)Reply[reply]