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This topic is may WP:BIO1E, but she became a martyr of Myanmar. Quick search, and it looks like there are a number of sources supporting the subject of this article. I think it would be better to take AFD. Taung Tan (talk) 15:54, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Please include only factual material supported by reliable sources. I can find no source that states her father was a barber, nor that she was an only child. WWGB (talk) 03:02, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Taung Tan, as now stated several times you are trying to add WP:BIO Information to this article but you yourself moved this article subject from herself about subject being her death only so don't stop adding BIO Information. CommanderWaterford (talk) 09:32, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sun8908, I am sorry but you are comparing FAs with this one here - which is very far away from being a FA not even a C Class, further the subjects of both articles mentioned had by far more background to present than a young woman who joined a demonstration and was shot (so sadly it is, don't get me wrong). CommanderWaterford (talk) 16:23, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
CommanderWaterford, as WP:FA notice, featured articles are considered to be some of the best articles Wikipedia has to offer, so I think they are worth comparing since I couldn't find any policies related to whether a VICTIM article should contain bio background information. Fewer information to present doesn't mean they are not worth presenting, right? Sun8908Talk03:34, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
What do you mean? According to source, her parent name are unknown but owner of the "Aye Aye Myint Salon". That's is all. Thanks
You wrote "She was the only child[13] of Aye Aye Myint Salon.[14]". Since she cannot be a child of a business, you must think her parent(s) are "Aye Aye Myint Salon"? Your edits are confusing and frustrating. Regards, WWGB (talk) 10:45, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The last my Explanation and will not reply again, My first added content was "Kyal Sin was the only child[13] of the owner of barber shop Aye Aye Myint Salon." [2], But you fixed it to current version. However this fact is not important for the aricle. It'is Ok ! Btw, Yes CommanderWaterford Pls watch me for how long but miss me. Thanks, tk Taung Tan (talk) 12:32, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Taung Tan: whatever you may have originally added, you and not someone else are the one who added the sentence that said "She was the only child÷ of Aye Aye Myint Salon" [3]. Do take more care when editing in the future. Also as already pointed out to you, WP:OTHER means ultimately what is in some other article is not a convincing argument for what is covered in this article. But having looked at Death of Chow Tsz-lok (this version [4]), there seem to be some differences between what's there and what you're trying to add here. I can see one detail there is perhaps comparable "was born on 13 August 1997". Maybe "computer science", "second-year" and "undergraduate". The other stuff isn't really comparable. The fact he was a student at "Hong Kong University of Science and Technology" is an important part of the story since it relates to why there was a lot of protest and discussion connected to HKUST. Likewise, the lack of knowledge about his political views, may be relevant since questions were raised whether he was a participant in the protests around where he died. I do not see any similar relevance for the content you were trying to add. Note that people have not removed the Facebook stuff here. This does seem relevant as an indication she understood all too well the dangers of taking part in protests given the history of the Myanmar military. Even the other stuff about her career etc which has less clear relevance has been left. Nil Einne (talk) 14:01, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]