Could you add into here that he was already playing inline hockey (from the age of four according to ref #5) before he saw Cry-baby Crosby at the age of 8. (Not that I'm biased..)
"..he was able to get a deferment until June 2018, after the 2018 NHL Entry Draft." If possible, could do with a little more here. I had a read through the reference (hence finding the above point) and it alludes to the fact that his IDF draft status could be reviewed if he does well in the NHL draft? Is there anything more on this anywhere?
Playing career
"He also joined the.." and not much later "He also helped.." is a little repetitive.
This might be an WP:ENGVAR thing, but rather than "..tying for tournament lead in scoring.." I would prefer "..tying for the tournament lead in scoring.."
"This however was appealed.." Don't think "however" is needed here, it would work just as well without.
"..improved in 2016–17 season.." Again, I'd prefer "..improved in the 2016–17 season.."
Career statistics
This section needs a reference.
Overall a nice succinct article. There's a good chance that draft reports and the like might give a bit more information over the next year, and if he gets into the NHL then it'll need a fair bit of work, but those are bridges to cross when we get there. Right now, it does the job, and I really can't find much wrong with it, good work. Harriastalk11:49, 12 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Addressed everything here. And agreed, if/when he gets drafted it will both allow for some expansion, and lead to some quick updating, but I should be able to handle that easily enough. Kaiser matias (talk) 11:34, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]