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1. Well-written:
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
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A couple of minor issues noted.
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
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No issues noted.
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2. Verifiable with no original research:
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
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Fine.
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
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Fine.
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2c. it contains no original research.
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Fine.
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
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That's got to be the cleanest report I've seen from Earwig's tool (at 4.8%)
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3. Broad in its coverage:
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
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Inasmuch as it seems to be very much about her as a philosopher rather than a person. We don't even have a birthdate, let alone any familial or social life information. While not required, such would clearly improve the article.
- I have no sources, primary or otherwise, which go into this kind of thing. I might be able to find a birthdate, but I'd be nervous about including it based on WP:DOB. I agree that this gives the article an air of incompleteness, and I probably wouldn't pursue FAC for that reason, but I'd be inclined to say that it meets the slightly laxer GA requirements. Josh Milburn (talk) 00:10, 25 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
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Fine.
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
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One potential tweak noted below.
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
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No edit wars noted.
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6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
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Fine.
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
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No "photo needed" on the talk page, should be one there. Kind of odd to have pictures of her school and a peer critic, but none of the article subject herself.
- Granted. I should be able to get a photo in the coming months. Josh Milburn (talk) 00:10, 25 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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7. Overall assessment.
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Passing per improvements.
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