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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 17:03, 2 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

General

• 2 disambiguation links to correct
  • Corrected.
• 2 external links to correct
  • The two links shown here works fine I can see. It must be the tool malfunctioning.

Introduction

• You can note that "Artpop" is stylized "ARTPOP", like in the album article.
• "...performed it at (not on) her ArtRave party"
• Which means that the next piece should read "...on the Lady Gaga and the Muppets' Holiday Spectacular on ABC"

Background and development

• The block quote you give isn't mentioned in the citation provided.
  • Thanks to 11JORN, he provided a working URL.
• There is also a misspelling of "Artpop" at the very beginning of that block quote.

Recording and composition

• The sample looks good to me, good size and good fair-use rationale.
• In the last sentence of this section, can you write "ARTPOP" as "Artpop"?

Release and reception

• There is one instance where "black" is misspelled "blacl".
• You can just say Popdust instead of Popdust.com website.

Live performances

• Can you make the picture of Gaga a little larger just so we can see the detail a little bit more?
  • I kept it default so that based on the screen resolution the image adjusts itself.
• "...invited singer Elton John as a special guest star for (not on) the performance"
• Can you find another word that sounds a bit more encyclopedic instead of "decked"?

Aside from the couple instances that I've listed above, the spot-checking went very smoothly. After the comments above have been addressed, I will be able to pass the article. WikiRedactor (talk) 18:06, 2 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Jorn ^talk 05:17, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I changed some other bits missed. Thanks 11JORN. —Indian:BIO · ^{[ ChitChat ]} 06:00, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me you guys, nice work! I'm going to pass the article! WikiRedactor (talk) 20:22, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]