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Nominator: Greenish Pickle! (talk · contribs) and StarScream1007 (talk · contribs) 03:57, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 01:28, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Will take this on hopefully sometime tomorrow or within the coming days. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 01:28, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
1. Article is well-written. A few typos and iffy wordings here and there but nothing too overly detrimental.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad, but rather weak in places. It feels like a weird limbo between there and not that I can't really describe.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Any vandalism was minor and dealt with days before the GAR.
6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale.
-What is the Racoon Police Department? Specify a bit. Done
-Same for the Umbrella Corporation. Specify that they're a villainous organization. Done
-"Several actors have portrayed Wesker, including Jason O'Mara, Shawn Roberts, Tom Hopper, and Lance Reddick in the live-action Resident Evil series." Did all of them portray him in live action, or just Reddick? They indeed are. 🥒Greenish Pickle!🥒 (🔔) 00:48, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
-Minor nitpick, but perhaps you could include a multi-image infobox with all of his live action actors? It feels a bit odd having only O'Mara there. Done
-Do we need to know the locations of every Resident Evil game featuring Wesker?
-"She also said that since Nietzche passed away a few years before the Nazi Party was founded, he was unable to personally propose his theory to them, but his sister did. Subsequently, the Nazi Party used the concept of the Übermensch to uphold white supremacy." This is just a history recap that isn't too relevant to Wesker. Done removing it.
-Source 66 feels more like a source discussing the Umbrella Chronicles more than anything related to Wesker's character. Done removing it.
-"Jesse Schedeen of IGN discussed his appearances across the franchise, in which she said that Wesker is "the best bad guys are the ones that wear shades."" Quote doesn't work due to lack of grammar. Done fixing it.
-I worry the Forbes source is more about Reddick as an actor than Wesker, given Wesker is mentioned for all of two lines. I feel the Afterlife source is also a bit trivial, but given it's supporting wider points, I'm not entirely against it. Not done, maybe it should be fine.
I feel iffy on this article. On the one hand, it's not terrible, and mostly meets criteria, but it feels a step removed from a true Good Article. I'm not going to fail this yet, but I feel a second opinion would be greatly valued here, so I've requested for one to be given. To whoever answers this, I'd like just a general judge of the article, as I'm just not quite certain if this article meets the criteria or not. The sourcing feels weak in spots, and yet doesn't feel outright terrible, and I'm not quite sure what to make of it. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 00:21, 18 April 2024 (UTC)