18:1218:12, 27 March 2022diffhist−2 m
Rex Garrod
Copyedit: removed comma that was incorrectly setting off a restrictive subordinate clause (and while I was at it changed the relative pronoun from "which" to "that" in the interest of improved clarity).Tag: Visual edit
16:2216:22, 15 January 2021diffhist+13
Herlinde Koelbl
Copyedit: changed past tense to present perfect in conformity with English-language idiom; split long sentence into two sentences for the sake of clarity and rhythm.Tag: Visual edit