Please help me out with a review to check if this article is acceptable or not. Thanks!
BanerjeeSohini (talk) 11:51, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
This page was created on October 27, 2011. The wish for review is because of the wanting to rate the page. Awaiting reply. Thanks
Sghotankar (talk) 13:11, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lorenzo_Gaztañaga
Looking for overall feedback, as this is my first official post. Also the ñ in his name/url... will that exclude anyone spelling/searching without the tilde? If yes, can I create a redirect link from the Americanized spelling "Gaztañaga"? Finally, I'd like to add/link to a picture. Is that uploaded to the wiki site, or can it be hosted where it currently lives?
Thanks in advance!
Danthereed (talk) 13:31, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
Requesting any and all feedback. Much appreciated. Also, will my username be removed if I submit the article to go live? If not, how do I remove it from the page title?
Allison Rubacky (talk) 14:09, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I have made a complete rewrite of the article about the Italian singer-songwriter Francesco Guccini, and I would like to receive some feedback/comments/criticism/tips.
I mainly translated from the corresponding article on Italian Wikipedia (which is an FA)
Here is the Diff link.
Thanks in advance!
Zidanie5 (talk) 14:34, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
I moved this to make it visible about 2 weeks ago. This page has since been edited twice by others, but without removing the "New unreviewed article" template. Removing that would be a useful step forward.
Perhaps unusually, there are probably more references than would normally be used for this amount of text. (And I discarded some of the references I first put in). I think the text needs expanding, but don't know how far to go before it becomes "original research" rather than paraphrasing and easy-reading and clarification.
Thanks to anyone who spends time on this. And a special thanks to anyone already familiar with OpenRAW and can add to the article! Barry Pearson 18:10, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
This is a new article about an architectural studio well known in architectural and construction circles. It needs reviewing by someone other than the author.
Sionk (talk) 18:52, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
Lomoyan (talk) 20:12, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you again for your feedback, and for your patience with my sincere and inexperienced attempt to contribute. (Professor Chen is well-known within his field, and I had incorrectly thought that I had to back up his information with primary source references and papers, which I have now removed.) As you recommended, I have attempted to summarize Professor Chen's information, and referenced only secondary sources. I hope that this meets acceptable standards for submission. Thank you again, Rubinm (talk) 14:58, 31 October 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback. His MIt faculty page is linked under external references, and the footnotes in the first paragraph (2,3,4,5,6) are the journals produced from the papers delivered at the special conferences held in his honor. If I clarify that, does that help qualify this article? The honors are all cited by press releases listed in the references. Rubinm (talk) 11:54, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
I am a new contributor, and wish to add a Wikipedia page on Sow-Hsin Chen, a living scientist who is internationally known and respected in the field of Applied Radiation Physics. He has published over 400 peer-reviewed articles, received prestigious awards, spoken at innumerable international conferences, and would be a valuable addition to the Wikipedia. Would you please review my draft contribution and offer feedback? Many thanks. Rubinm (talk) 11:54, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
Rubinm (talk) 20:28, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
Can someone please edit this article to fit the WP guidelines. It needs to be edited by someone other than the author