This is my first article, about a nonprofit organization in New York that didn't have a Wikipedia article on it yet. It needs a final review--would appreciate any feedback!
Joy8o (talk) 01:23, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
I've made a few changes about a non-profit organization, CARRD. Feedback on updated article would be much appreciated. Thank you!
Alexe3 (talk) 02:07, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
The page is about the current owner of a Grade II listed building in Headingley, Leeds, UK. The building itself has a wikipedia page Moorfield House, Headingley and the current owner is mentioned, however there's no page for owner in Wikipedia yet. So I thought it might be a nice idea to provide some historical information about it. Feedback is very much appreciated. Thanks.
Mibusouha (talk) 09:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
<ref>[http://www.website.com|Reference name goes here!]</ref> Chevymontecarlo 11:14, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Looking for general feedback on my first article. It covers a community for convicted sex offenders in Florida.
Yllt (talk) 10:30, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
I created a draft of my first article on Wikipedia. Please, how can I move this draft to the public sector of Wikipedia? Thanks for your kind help! Siteselection (talk) 10:33, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this the right use of a notable person, confirm use of references.
Freshstrawberry (talk) 11:08, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
How is my article?
Ashwinindia (talk) 13:21, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first time creating an article and I would appreciate some feedback on what I should do to make it more appropriate.
AvrokoPA (talk) 15:12, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
how do i publish my draft?
Acmmonk (talk) 16:46, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Hiya.
I've got an article I wrote a little while back and I'm not sure where to go from here. The game I wrote the article about and the author are referenced by other Wikipedia entries and there is a link in the author's entry that goes to a novel of the same name (one of the big reasons for me wanting to write it). I have found every reference I could to the game on line and the sources I cite seem to be used as reliable sources in other, similar articles. I'm not sure what else to add.
Please review the article and tell me what I can add to get it greenlit, if anything?
Sincerely, Marshall "Stephen" Bush LordFluffy (talk) 18:35, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Succulentpope (talk) 18:42, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Attempting to demonstrate notability about a paranormal researcher while maintaining neutrality about a controversial subject.
Samorgan44 (talk) 19:21, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
This is a relatively short article, but it's new, so any feedback greatly appreciated. Thanks! By the time you read this, I also should have added the school's logo, which should be useable under the Wikipedia logo fair use policy.
Charles3395 (talk) 19:25, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
A bit of an odd one for feedback here, I'm an experienced editor, but I've re-written a BLP where the subject is Wikipedia user. I'd appreciate someone looking over and checking that the article is up to scratch WormTT 20:38, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
My first short article's about a former pro soccer player, his career and achievements. I'd really value some feedback on style and layout please. Thanks in anticipation.
Worpete (talk) 20:45, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review & let me know any suggestions. Thanks!
Smokebomb (talk) 21:02, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Although there is a website at http://www.ournavy.org.uk dedicated to this important film and photography pioneer, there's been no Wikipedia article - so I have written one based on all the research I have done on Alfred J West so far. 81.86.142.64 (talk) 12:27, 26 February 2011 (UTC)