More sources[edit]

The following book sources can be used to improve and expand the article. North America1000 10:05, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

COI template[edit]

I removed the COI template from atop the article, because the user who added the template (diff) had already removed content from the article (diff, diff) posted by AliciaE (diff). The article is neutral in tone at this time and does not require cleanup. Please see Template:COI § When to use for more information, such as "...this tag is not meant to be a badge of shame or to "warn the reader" about the identities of the editors." North America1000 18:01, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

the coi problem has been addressed. The promotionalism problem has not, and I added the appropriate template. I did remove some of the worst of it, include such PR-talk reasons for founding a company as "attempting to sell a new technology that he had developed" -- which is not exactl ydistinctive or of any encyclopedic interest. Since the firm is notable, there might be something to be said for deleting the entire article and rewriting. DGG ( talk ) 05:37, 4 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]