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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:53, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:53, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll copyedit as I go through; please revert as needed. There are some dead links: [1], [2], [3], and [4].
where most of the edifice is located: "edifice" is not the right word; it means a structure built by humans. There are several other instances of the word later in the article; is this perhaps a piece of technical vocabulary? It reads very oddly to me. However, if it's standard usage in geology, don't change it.
Lava flows are fresh: "fresh" seems like an odd word to use of a dormant volcano. Does this just mean that it's not yet significantly eroded?
which reach dimensions of 4 by 2 kilometres (2.5 mi × 1.2 mi) over horizontal distance: I think this could be cut to "which are 4 by 2 kilometres".
the latest about 200 years ago., unless you want to specify. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 11:53, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
Periglacial landscapes are frequent in the area; they include plantation surfaces,: what does "plantation surface" mean?
with the 0 °C (32 °F) isotherm hovering between 4,800–4,900 °C (8,670–8,850 °F) elevation: presumably this should be feet, not degrees.
These are all minor points; I'll promote the article once they're resolved. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:05, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
Fixes look good. Sorry, just realized I hadn't posted some notes on the sources and footnotes:
Neither of these is an issue for GA so I'm going to go ahead and promote anyway. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:00, 9 February 2018 (UTC)