"These valleys serve as a radical drainage for several small streams" - what is radical referring to here? Am I thinking of it the wrong way, or is it used as a geology term?
Maybe I was thinking about it too much, I thought "What is known for certain" felt like an extract from a journal, but it's fine JAGUAR16:32, 29 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"In H. S. Bostock's 1948 report Physiography of the Canadian Cordillera, With Special Reference to the Area North of the Fifty-Fifth Parallel he states that Level Mountain" - comma needed in between "parallel" and "he"
"Level Mountain experiences relatively light snowfall unlike the westerly Coast Mountains" - the fact that the Coast Mountains are west is already established
I spent a long time reading through and checking this article. Simply put, it is close to meeting the FA criteria and should pass this GAN easily once all of the minor prose issues are addressed. This is an excellent article as it is both comprehensive and well written. JAGUAR15:15, 28 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for addressing them! This meets the GA criteria now, so I'll be promoting. From a reader's point of view, it looks like this is close to meeting the FA criteria because it is comprehensive and well written (the main factors for an FA). Admittedly I'm no expert on volcanoes, so perhaps some people who are knowledgeable in the matter would spotcheck some technical things. I would advise to go over the sources before nominating, as I've had well-written articles fail at FAC because some prose didn't comply with the sources. I'll be happy to look at this again if you decide to nominate in the future. JAGUAR16:32, 29 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]